Here's how I judge an outline...strip away the colors, arrows, whips, extensions, pulls, lumps, bumps, spikes or whatever add ons and look at the base letters and If they can stand on their own or not. You lack foundation and you need to work on it. Start from square one. You will most likely ignore this advice just like a lot of others. If you stick to it, sooner or later you will see the light and be ambarrassed that you ever decided to post this stuff.