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Wink ONE

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  1. It seems she loved the smell of winter

    Whenever it came, something got in her

    Her eyes glimmered, breeze tossed her hair

    Pleasant smile, watched her red nostrils flare

    Yearning for the chance to play around

    Spent all day hiking ontop of the mounds

    Crawling to the next after she came it down

    She's been crowned Queen of the Mountain

    In love to where she can't live without it

    Each day she went to paradise, I thought her selfish

    But I saw how the frostbite renders her helpless

    She danced like Indians for a shower of snow

    Wind burned, couldn't leave if she didn't powder her nose

    You know how it goes, she took the hard road happily

    But I let it go on, I let her enjoy her own tragedy

    Mangled by her own apathy- she had no judgement

    But I sat back, I did nothing

    I always believed some cold air opened the chest

    Till I found her in a pile of snow, frozen to death.

     

     

    This belongs on an album I'm working on, but, whatever. Battle raps whenever I get home.

  2. Originally posted by rattleytins@Nov 21 2005, 09:57 AM

    i know its stereotyping but from my experience black people are more exposed to rap so they know if they're shit, wheras you'll get rich white kids who think they're cool

     

     

    Oh, word, so Lil John, Yin Yang Twins and all those other garbage rappers aren't aware of them sucking?

     

    I'll take white kid rap, kthnx.

     

    Milton, if you set a thread up or whatever, I'll rap with you.

  3. Originally posted by rattleytins@Nov 20 2005, 05:59 PM

    , that doesn't mean white people can't rap, it may mean less can though because they dont really understand what rap is.

     

     

    White people don't understand what rap is? So being black gives you some innate knowledge of what rap music is all about?

  4. What would possess you to fight with your arms at your side? Isn't that asking for a punch in the face?

     

    And the kung-fu was a lot of arm-flailing trying to block Poncho's punches, but ill nonetheless when he came with the haymaker to the jaw.

  5. Originally posted by KRON KING@Jun 8 2005, 12:00 AM

    The 15-kilogram (33-pound) battery-powered suit, code-named HAL-5, detects muscle movements through electrical-signal flows on the skin surface and then amplifies them.

     

    The way the machine works makes it seem like you would be able to run faster with it. Maybe a little faster than your average

    but, it is 33lbs weighing you down, so you won't be outrunning cars or nothing.

  6. Dude was getting amped to shoot people, too- jumping up and down and everything.

     

    Dunno, that shit would be wierd..all of a sudden being in a game. I wouldn't be able to handle it. I'd have been trying to kick those doors down and trying to gun butt that first zombie in the hall way. That's all after crying like a little girl.

  7. Eh, it's more of a personal preferance there. With straights, I happen to like rounded, but some people

    pull off straight edge pretty well, too.

    I suggest trying both, getting good at both, just don't mix them.

  8. You just ignored everything that was provided by Leader, Flayed, and myself.

     

    Don't round out your letters like that yet, keep them relatively straight and overlap them.

     

    Overlapping shouldn't be where you only see part of a letter- you should be able to see the majority of it. (Which you did successfully)

     

    About the piece itself- make your "1" look like a "1"- that flacid penis replica won't cut it.

    "2" and "Z" look the same, make the "Z" cut harder on the edges.

    Go back and do the bar method on "Prophet", whilst overlapping.

  9. Scrib:

     

    Like Milton said, there needs to be some fluidity to your letters, which you've got.

     

    Post a fresh piece of yours, trying to overlap as best as you know how, and we'll go from there.

  10. Scribbler:

     

    You made it seem you want to get better, so, I'll help more.

     

    Get your letters proportional (Same width/height). That means every bar (See IBCs example) is the same size as every other bar.

     

    DON'TS:

     

    1. Don't be afraid to erase. There should be many more marks than there are.

    2. Don't overlap your letters yet- there's a method to linking/overlapping your letters that you're not ready for yet.

     

     

    DO'S:

    1. Keep resketching your name over and over.

    2. Get a good selection of fonts to copy (sans serif preferably)

    3. Do a page or so of the whole alphabet in simples- you can never understand letters enough.

  11. Stop twisting your letters, make them straight up and down- copy this exactly and then redraw it, and redraw it..just when you're sick of it- redraw it again:

     

    RISE

     

    you need to get an idea of what goes into a letter before you can start contorting them.

     

    Also: Don't do any 3d yet, you don't understand that yet, either.

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