@Vare - A lot of unnecessary things in your piece. Go simpler and drop those arrows.
@Humor - I think an O in there would've helped the flow of the M and R, otherwise its nice.
@Deos - Nice style
Whats happenin. New to the forum, been posting on BombingScience for a grip but wanna reach out more. Posting some stuff from older to newer. Crits are appreciated.
Now I'm working on this one