why the fuck would you be on here if you are not a writer? and then why would you feel the need to give any input at all. telling a writer his shit looks good when you infact are not a writer is like a homeless guy giving a gay dude fashion advice.
wow that shitty ass fill should not have gone over that vose at all... and its been there since 2007... if you cant step to a wall, step away from it...