I'm not good at handstyles but I'll critique it a bit, hopefully some others will agree...
Change the s completely, especially that extension, the p is overlapping the s too much I think, and lose that extension on the p or make it look better, the e is ok, but notice how you have some letters tilted in one direction and other letters tilted in another direction. This isn't necessarily a bad thing it can make handstyles look good but generally if you want good flow the letters should all tilt in one direction. Lose the quotation marks, lose the squiggly line at the bottom also, or make it better.. also take away that FAK thing or make it look better because the letters are disproportionate and dont really look good...
I guess what I'm trying to say is hit the books more... look at other handstyles and look at how the letters fall in place with eachother, they usually fit quite nicely.