kief

could I get some crits on these? mostly worried about the 1st two

I like everything about the second one more except the D

I think the r looks like a k, and the s doesn't look like an s at all

Shit I've been messing around with

thanks... here's another one I did recently... I promise to stop using lined paper and pencils soon... I know it looks bad

sloppy throw... goofy ass character, meh another char thing... shitty handstyle zombie alien snowman things

Some more toy shit for y'all to laugh at: Crits? I'll get some better paper, and some markers and stuff soon.

Posted this on bombingscience, too lazy to rewrite so it's the same post I did these last night, didn't have any good paper (just used an old school organizer thing) or markers or anything but for the first things I've ever written I'm pretty happy with a couple of them. This was the first, and my favorite of them all: Shitty little sharpie throw: Pretty ugly thing I tried to do a little 3d with: This pic is pretty blurry but I liked the K on it: I kinda threw this shitty character in randomly... the mouth is screwed and the f is kinda lame: ...and my least favorite of them all: So... anybody want to give me some pointers?