aerosol try making your line widths more consistent and sluts or mess whatever you want to be called, clean it up a bit, try moving your marker a little quicker and cleaner as for the M try to match it up a little more with the left side as its pretty decent over there but you start to lose it, best way to learn simple letter style is to use a ruler to mark out a 2-3 inch tall rectangle and try to stay in that so you stay straight and about the same size, i would be more concerned with the "S"'s as they are really in need of help. as for all toys here the best thing to remember is to sit back after youre done and look at a few pieces from writers you know are good and established and look at them and you will see one thing they all have in common which is FLOW your piece bomb simple hand ANYTHING has to flow smooth, it has to look like it belongs there rather than just some letters plopped on a paper. try to be consistent with your line widths try to keep to the same style add on and letters but like everyone else says try using a REAL simple font and just copy that tll you can get it nice and clean then add on little extensions to the letters and slowly work till you understand flow and form.... word piss drunx mother fucking NIGHT OWLS BITCH
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