eh..if anything, the overdone bubbles are the only thing worth mentioning..no offence but i've seen better letters on an etch-a-sketch homie..your E's look like they have retarded forheads and the N looks like a crack baby from hell. i mean c'mon...you spent more time on thinking about the colors then you did on those letters....but hey..if you're going for the whole "i'm just trying to do clean pieces" mentality then you're on your way G.
Rain Man could bust better bitten characters than that too, the overplayed stiched doll head is almost making me wanna shoot your ass, but i might just find what poe-dunk shake you paint on and cross the shit out.....so with all harshness aside, keep up the posts..just in the right thread...i think tonka is looking for some logos so hit that up..they might like those E's....
but seriously. just work with the fact that you can do clean shit.. My advice would be to work on those letters...i like where the O is going but everything else looks novelty...no beef
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