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    My "Crazy" Piece Check it out.

    in Paper Chase

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    aight so we were all just as toy as this kid at some point. in my opinion go to the toy thread, but your problems are as follows

    1. it says crazy, could you get any gayer? and your real name is Deuce? like the gun? come on man get a better name. i know you can think of something better.

    2.your letter style is not your style, in fact claiming any style as your own style is damn near impossible. but it doesnt mean you cant have your own creativity.

    3. your fill is not cuttin it, you got a dark color on top and then from the bottom is one solid orange color, at the bottom of the piece you should have givin it a lighter orange to give the piece more flow to it (i could be wrong, im color blind as fuck)

    4. your extensions dont make sense, everything is too straight, like its too blockish, i can see your goin for the classic new york letter style, even those letters were curvey, a common misconception is all the letters were straight, they varied throughout the piece which is what made them so good.

    5 your handstyle just proves your a toy, no style to it, the halo is whack as fuck, and the letters dont match, theres too much space between them and way too many doo dads off the side of them a good handstyle should look good without any add ons, and if you are going to give it some, give it 1-2 tops. on the rare occasion 3. dont put a crown on it. the best way to get better with handstyles is get a notbook and a ball point pen, and fill them up until it looks good.

    6. leave your pride behind you. you will natually think your shit looks good cause you put effort into it and you dont want to be disapointed in yourself, once you leave that shit behind you will progress. personal critisim is the way to get better.

    7. go simple, work your way through handstyles, then throwys, then straight letters then pieces then murals, then flat out burners. dont try and run before you can crawl. if you add small extensions off your straight letter, you will get better on the walls and on paper.

     

    dont think this is me bein a dick. im just saying what needs to be said. you asked for critisism and you arent taking it very well. if you learn from what i said and what others say. you will get better.

     

    peace.

    Northwest Superthread II(without crappy flicks)

    in Brick Slayers

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    how do you know if somone is better than you? you may judge from what you see, but yet , you may be completely unaware of a persons talent. for example someone can kill the city with throws, and thats all you would know them by. but really when it comes down to actual skill, you will get burned. you would never know you will get burned because you never SEEN any of their burners.

    Dont go over anyone (or cross them out) unless you got personal beef, unless your going to burn what they did, or your ready to fight. now all this BITCH ASS DICK TAKING FAGGOT talk is really childish. dont whine like a 2 year old because somone went over you, man the fuck up and handle your business potna!

    im not intending to direct this to the person i quoted, im just expressing my opinion. if you dont like my opinion,:lol: :lol: :lol:

    nah, no one went over me, im just seein burners gettin dissed by kids who suck and dont even have credit. im also seein people who kill the city with legit throws and their shit is gettin dissed too or just hated on, not even on a personal level, just on "im gonna cross this guy out cause i can" thats the kinda shit im seein. and its fuckin gay. disagree with me if you want, but crossin toys out or crossin legit writers out..either way all it does is cause problems for yourself. i still dont see the point in it.

    GIMERS BOOKS

    in Paper Chase

    Posted

    motherfuckers gotta stop showing toys this spot

    this is 12oz. home of the toy talk. its just a bunch of toys lookin for styles to bite. for some reason they cant stay on the toy threads. they gotta go to the good ones. go look at the northwestsuperthread on brick slayers. its the epidemy of whining bitching and toys complaining about how much other writers suck compared to their toy ass shit. it proves my point pretty damn well.

    Northwest Superthread II(without crappy flicks)

    in Brick Slayers

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    you guys is fuckin gay. get off your period, stop whining like 12 year old girls, post flicks, or go out bombing so then maybe someone will post your graff so we dont have to listen to you bitch ass fools complain about who's tags suck or whos dont. until then, stop acting like your vaginas are leaking. shut up, and grow the fuck up. if you disagree, then go fuck yourself, your only proving my point, and making your points worse.

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