Fatol
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freak-thanks for the support man, good shit. ive herd to work structure before, wich i kinda do and dont, i was hoping it could develop with the shitty extensions hahaha.. im just not positive what ppl mean by stucture, i think its like bars line up so like if middle f bar goes threw vertical, it comes out the same distance from the bottom that it went threw.... iunnnnnnnooo.. OCD> hahahaha
darkeist- probably been drawin for time havent you? no need to start beef.
sneek-yeah man, sqquare letters, bubbles...jeez, remeber my first postsXD at least i got a point where someone said they can read it...lol
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been a while since ive been here....crits please???? be aware im not listening to everyone, being art, can't you technicly do what you want???whos to say whats right and wrong, as long as the word is there....maybee im ranting for no reason. lmao...crits????
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RADAR - your right leg on the 1st R in the throw is too small. I'd also try to round out the R tops less, or just throw some lower case r's on it... the had needs a vertical line on the D if youre going to do that, otherwise its hard to distinguish from an s... dope straight, and your last post shows you know what to expect in the future, keep it up, man.
FATOL - no hate on you but that looks like ass. your bars are far from consistent and not the same width... pretty much no on that one. again, no hate but just dont reuse this haha... keep up the straights it really will help after a while...
i know its bad. haha i was going to reuse the concept. fix the bars...iunno, ill keep workin on some simples as ive been doing.
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if your not happy with something why post it..........keeping color consistent is usually a good idea fatol....fatol i think you should just do what zen and radar are doing. just look at their posts on tha last few pages and do tha same.
payback..true say,just figured id see what ppl thought i guess...zen, haha the colours stopped when i relized i didnt like it...mass, i know do straights,ive done a bunch of straights, and bar size,width etc are consistant in them. i gotta start tryin something at some point.
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ok, so, my f is the wrong size, and i noticed my vertical right a bar was a different width, wich threw off my t...I got rushed on time with my o and l so the bottom bars are fucked, and the o woulda been a bit to big had i finsihed... but if i were to redo this making my f a little lest bent....anyways crits?
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hal..i have no idea waht that reads
fatol...although using graph paper is a great way to help out with simples ..youll eventually want to practice in non graph papers,..also work on straightening ur lines...
zen..the E looks smaller width-wise in the the colored sketch
yeah of course, i've been workin in a black sketchbook...im a toy, but i certanly have more supplies then one would expect from a toy. (full range of dual prisma, colour pencils, deco's, and mor paint markers, artist pencils etc.) haha there was a time when i used to draw alot, but thats six to seven years ago.
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I deleted that last post, but yeah, makes sensse...just gonna fill this little blue book up with simples thenXD
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simple enough?
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No crits???
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some shit ive been doin, some of thease i hate (3rd pic)...and i definetly dont like the colour,also needed to connect that middle a bar i just had pens and i was on a bus, also needed to cennect that middle a bar..not the best time to draw, but w.e...crits. please? and yes im still doing simples, ill post some of those in a few days.
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I was thinking of putting this up this weekend on a legal, any thoughts?
whats that say? lol, i know i seem hopless..im doin simples..nottaworry.
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if you have difficulties reading DUNCE, you need to look at more graffiti. that's a pretty simple concept with some style thrown in.
Also, if you can't read it, you need to go AS SIMPLE AS POSSIBLE with your own work because you don't have a concept of what letter structure is yet.
the u threw me off a bit, just cus of the glare on the third bar and how its attached to the n...
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double pos..oops
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Dunce, iight that looks like dunce... and as for the week, im goin to spend free time drawing some keyboard letters post the last one up, then see what im at...what supposed to do keyboard letters alll night?
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iight, be back in a week to check inXD whats that shit say?
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like msword fonts type deal? or just make a font up type deal? I know i'm asking alot here, I just dont wanna do what my buddy is doing (drawing graffiti but just randomly coming up with stuff, changin bar sizes, extensions from the middle of a bar)
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so continue what ive been doing then?XD this being my last post for a while.
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so it starts here... i said i could do keyboard letters and now all my letters are different sizes and my lines arent that straight, and bars arent the same size..... fuck lol. so just draw this up mad times?
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done deal bro.
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right its a throwie. lmfao my bad. and keep it simple, well i could sit and draw keyboard letters, but they are square and boring, how do i proceed from those square letters?
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Just startin out with this...Some advice would be cool, keep the negatives positives...as in dont bash for being a toy and shit please. joined this site so i can learn!!! Not have ppl down my throat saying stop trying or give up, or get outta here. So a simple, and a bad bad tag, im toy and i know the tag is bad...
Toys post here...
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its the camera that makes it blurry.....ill start scaning soon...i know whats coming i think, stay simple...iunno i think you can see the simple letters with random add ons....haha. im still truckin on the simples..