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Originally posted by geist@Sep 7 2005, 10:40 AM

 

I know the bottom of the E is fucked up but other than that, something I did for a girl I was with at the time.

 

help is appriciated

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Maybe the letters can be more portioned but its just too wavey. Other tha n the bites ID be proud of this piece.... still hella biting though.. thats cool... ill remain a toy myself until I can just do my own thing.

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Originally posted by vare_one+Sep 2 2005, 07:58 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (vare_one - Sep 2 2005, 07:58 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-GearSalad@Sep 2 2005, 03:56 AM

vare: you use like 7 diff styles and arnt good at any, IMO you are getting "inspired" by someone else.

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pardon i may refraise the comment u just made to vare : u are TRYING LIKE & DIFFERENT STYLES

 

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The anime char is kinda dope the letters dont quite match up.... I dunno it doesnt really flow and the e reminds me of like tuning fork for some reason. If you did the char on the right I'd love to see more. Rare I see anime in a piece.

 

EDIT::: this piece would look way way better if the V was proportioned with the R

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Originally posted by NEEK@Aug 24 2005, 10:34 PM

burden

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thats a burner right there

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Is this too involved for first startin out?