r3nz042 Posted December 4, 2013 Share Posted December 4, 2013 I try to make my letter's skinny, but they end up looking fat and ugly. I feel like an anorexic writer. I am overweight so maybe my personal appearance respresents my shit on paper? Any help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aLBERThOFFMAN Posted December 4, 2013 Share Posted December 4, 2013 ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 4, 2013 Share Posted December 4, 2013 Diet and exercise? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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r3nz042 Posted December 5, 2013 Author Share Posted December 5, 2013 Dude, quit posting your wife on this site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CILONE/SK Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 Someone is loving that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aLBERThOFFMAN Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 This nigga propped me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inappropriate_Responder Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 Bring the bar up to your chess, then push it up harder than the rest Stay chizzled Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 post a pic of a sketch you did so we have an idea of what youre talking about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
r3nz042 Posted December 5, 2013 Author Share Posted December 5, 2013 Don't have a camera at my crib, only at my parent's house. But I do have a flick of this piece I did like 4 1/2 years ago, gasp, cover your eyes. Ugh, don't even look at this. Terrible garbage toy shit surburban punk stuff when I first started writing unfortunately :S Was big into drinking back then and being a dumbass. Obviously this is terrible and I've learned a lot since these days. But it's just fat and ugly, I wish I could slim down my stem's and bridges. It look's too graffiti-ish and less mature/professional. I want a balance of both to become the best writer in town..And please save the shit talk, I know it's whack and unprofessional and pathetic but I'm doing my best in my black book to prevent mistakes like this from ever hitting the walls again. This was down in the Suburbs too so I guess it's okay for that. I've been reading a lot of books that have taught me a lot about using pencil's and the important of black book, I'm starting to learn to feel comfortable violating my lines and kind of using them to my advantage. Intersecting stuff then erasing. I know this is black book forum but I don't have any way to upload my shit. Lol, it's funny because I was like 500 pounds overweight when I did. I live like a half hour from my parent's house walking so really don't feel like getting the camera. Maybe you can move this to the brick slayer's. But this really is a true depiction of how much letter's go down on paper, how they start, just big and sloppy like this. I start to slim them down, but it just doesn't feel natural. Feels like I'm fighting myself. It's like my A's barely have enough room to hit the hole at the top, at my B's feel cramped and overweight. My G's feel whack and certainly my S's are slacking too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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CILONE/SK Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 You doing it wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 Why is the only picture of your work you have readily available from 4 1/2 years ago? And after 4 1/2 years you haven't improved on that? Maybe hang it up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CILONE/SK Posted December 5, 2013 Share Posted December 5, 2013 I saw that too. I just thought he was saying that because he was embarrassed. Cant blame him. We are pretty harsh on newcomers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injury Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 Lemon$. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injury Posted December 6, 2013 Share Posted December 6, 2013 But this really is a true depiction of how much letter's go down on paper, how they start, just big and sloppy like this. I start to slim them down, but it just doesn't feel natural. Feels like I'm fighting myself. It's like my A's barely have enough room to hit the hole at the top, at my B's feel cramped and overweight. My G's feel whack and certainly my S's are slacking too. Stop thinking so hard, you'll hurt yourself It look's too graffiti-ish and less mature/professional. also, what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
r3nz042 Posted December 7, 2013 Author Share Posted December 7, 2013 I got caught and did 15 months in county that's why I ain't been getting up like I used to. My letter's just don't look lean or clean or whatever. They don't look mature enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inappropriate_Responder Posted December 7, 2013 Share Posted December 7, 2013 Ever in the day room trying to turn the dial? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hua Guofang Posted December 7, 2013 Share Posted December 7, 2013 This feels so very Rok1t-esque to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
r3nz042 Posted December 7, 2013 Author Share Posted December 7, 2013 Ever in the day room trying to turn the dial?No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted December 7, 2013 Share Posted December 7, 2013 post in the toy thread, there you will get crits, make lots of threads like these and you will end up ridiculed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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mothraSUCKS Posted December 8, 2013 Share Posted December 8, 2013 needs arrows, and halo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bowlofglasscereal Posted December 8, 2013 Share Posted December 8, 2013 Take the baww thread to /r9k/, r0kr >>>>>>>>>>>>> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
disconeckted Posted December 16, 2013 Share Posted December 16, 2013 embarrasing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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