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I have posted some pieces i did, ages ago, u might remember, smok it was. I thought it would be useful for me to post some sketches so you can criticise them. They are not very good, but I just wanted to know weather i am going in the right direction or not.

 

http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49784974'>

http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785315'>

http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785173'>

http://albums.photopoint.com/j/View?u=1678770&a=12877489&p=49785014'>

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ummm definitly old school flavor goin on there but just learn how to spell and change your name (smoke isnt the most original) and you will be good

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Guest hektic1F.E.C

do wht ever YOU feel is right, fuck everyone else

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WAaaaaaaay overboard on the colors. Do simpleler shit, 2 colors, then try mayby 3.

All the colors and writing are meking it look a lot uglier than it should be.

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there's a place for this, it's called

 

"Place to post if your stuff is new/wack"

 

just a suggestion.

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Originally posted by MystikPW:

well i think that the color schemes are okay...still very toy but going in the right direction, some of the effects are old school but your letter structure sucks except for a few of them..oh and the one where you tried to go wild style looks like ass...stay simple to start with

It's not good for toys to give toys advise, Didnt u ask how to do a piece or sum gay shit? Dude just keep at it, u seem to be practicing quite a bit, u'll improve.

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Does the 4th one down(the one that appears as if it were drawn on carboard) say AWR at the bottom? hmm...

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Originally posted by MESTHREE:

Im having an epeleptic fit

 

 

i can see why. i think your going in the right direction. why bother coloring it though....

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I LOVE those old-schoolish color schemes, they're rad...

Keep working on the letter forms.

I agree that the Dwight piece is the best.

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That "SARAH" Looks very similar to the "REAS" (located in SOHO fo' those who didn't know.)From The art of getting over.

 

Not to be redneck "I do like Mullets and Mesh hats" But your stuff is to artsey fartsey.

Slow it down. Kepp it simple untill it's so bomb your hand goes Wild.

 

Time for bed.

 

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"Is it better to be known as a Toy, or not at all."

 

[This message has been edited by TeckFiftyOne (edited 06-05-2001).]

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you guys are saying "go simple" but those are pretty much crooked bubble letters filled in fancy all u look at when you see a taggers book are the letters nothing else

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Guest MystikPW

well i think that the color schemes are okay...still very toy but going in the right direction, some of the effects are old school but your letter structure sucks except for a few of them..oh and the one where you tried to go wild style looks like ass...stay simple to start with

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Guest SezOneSke&SonsIncCo

not bad but are all those differnet names that you write?? you must be bizzy

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pleeeeeeeeeease dont tell me that says awr....and just a little tip: brickwall backgrounds dont make your piece any cooler, do some straight letters cuz those bubble ones just aint cuttin it..

 

Peace

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Thanks for the help, well wasnt much help really, you always say the same thing, go simpler, I enjoy colouring it in, cause then i can which colours work the best with each other. Whoever said, the one where i tried to a wildstyle i didn't, i was just trying out new things. Whoever said that Sarah looked like something from the art of getting over, I havent got that book, and I have no idea what u r talking about, so if u can, but u won't, post it so ohter people can see it as well.

Thanks again to evryone.

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