Deuce.Mjz Posted April 14, 2010 Share Posted April 14, 2010 Hey all Writers Wus up , This my first thread hope u like it , my old piece i did it.. Plz give your opinion and comment To take some advantage thx u all :) Deuce Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SONolAR187 Posted April 14, 2010 Share Posted April 14, 2010 needs moar arrows but seriously try not so many fades i guess you'd say or get better markers. and leave out the inlays OR if you really feel as if they're necissary drop a shadow behind them so it looks more organic and not just squiggly lines Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omesixer Posted April 14, 2010 Share Posted April 14, 2010 scrap the halo from your tag and put a crown dude... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pertplus1 Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 close thread, post in toy section Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 YOU ARE A FUCKING IDIOT. SHOOT YOURSELF IN THE HEAD SO YOU NEVER PICK UP A MARKER AGAIN. GO BACK TO BOMBING SCIENCE OR WHERE EVER THE FUCK YOU CAME FROM. AND STOP BITING MR. WIGGLES 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deuce.Mjz Posted April 15, 2010 Author Share Posted April 15, 2010 YOU ARE A FUCKING IDIOT. SHOOT YOURSELF IN THE HEAD SO YOU NEVER PICK UP A MARKER AGAIN. GO BACK TO BOMBING SCIENCE OR WHERE EVER THE FUCK YOU CAME FROM. AND STOP BITING MR. WIGGLES WTF Are u takin about this is my style and if it taken show me and prove it , and don't "f" with me , deuce u Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pertplus1 Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 DONT F WITH HIM BRAH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deuce.Mjz Posted April 15, 2010 Author Share Posted April 15, 2010 close thread, post in toy section you are just a member dude , and lok am still practicing man so if u gonna raise your head up and act like a "pro writer" till me wat to do to make my graff better , not only to post it on toy section , man shame on you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pertplus1 Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 learn english, close thread, post in toy section, kill self Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 DONT F WITH ME :lol: yeah you're an idiot. "your" style? that's a toy style that's what. By the way, to make it look more like graffiti you gotta add some more arrows and bits. The more you have, the "ghettoer" it looks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deuce.Mjz Posted April 15, 2010 Author Share Posted April 15, 2010 What's wrong with my english , am here to learn not to get fucked up from some "toys haters" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 A mexican immigrant with Down's syndrome has better English than you.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deuce.Mjz Posted April 15, 2010 Author Share Posted April 15, 2010 oky fine cause iam from middle east - saudi arabia not from america i talk arabic and my second language is english Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 king shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deuce.Mjz Posted April 15, 2010 Author Share Posted April 15, 2010 king shit thx man :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pertplus1 Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 LOL facepalm.img Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
filtypeterpbt Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 that piece is crazy!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 learn english, close thread, kill self fixed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickerman21 Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 What's wrong with my english , am here to learn not to get fucked up from some "toys haters" You'll learn in the toy thread. No one will help you outside of it, they'll just send you there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fat4l_0ne Posted April 15, 2010 Share Posted April 15, 2010 I thought it looked good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheve Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 Haha nigga said "Pro writer". Ay where you buy your dope color scheme?? Bombing science and oinkartld are all tapped out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 puregraffiti Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hifructose Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 aight so we were all just as toy as this kid at some point. in my opinion go to the toy thread, but your problems are as follows 1. it says crazy, could you get any gayer? and your real name is Deuce? like the gun? come on man get a better name. i know you can think of something better. 2.your letter style is not your style, in fact claiming any style as your own style is damn near impossible. but it doesnt mean you cant have your own creativity. 3. your fill is not cuttin it, you got a dark color on top and then from the bottom is one solid orange color, at the bottom of the piece you should have givin it a lighter orange to give the piece more flow to it (i could be wrong, im color blind as fuck) 4. your extensions dont make sense, everything is too straight, like its too blockish, i can see your goin for the classic new york letter style, even those letters were curvey, a common misconception is all the letters were straight, they varied throughout the piece which is what made them so good. 5 your handstyle just proves your a toy, no style to it, the halo is whack as fuck, and the letters dont match, theres too much space between them and way too many doo dads off the side of them a good handstyle should look good without any add ons, and if you are going to give it some, give it 1-2 tops. on the rare occasion 3. dont put a crown on it. the best way to get better with handstyles is get a notbook and a ball point pen, and fill them up until it looks good. 6. leave your pride behind you. you will natually think your shit looks good cause you put effort into it and you dont want to be disapointed in yourself, once you leave that shit behind you will progress. personal critisim is the way to get better. 7. go simple, work your way through handstyles, then throwys, then straight letters then pieces then murals, then flat out burners. dont try and run before you can crawl. if you add small extensions off your straight letter, you will get better on the walls and on paper. dont think this is me bein a dick. im just saying what needs to be said. you asked for critisism and you arent taking it very well. if you learn from what i said and what others say. you will get better. peace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoolWalkerTexasRanger Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 Stop biting from graffiticreator.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ORCA Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 crazy gay Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 Hey all Writers Wus up , This my first thread hope u like it , my old piece i did it.. Plz give your opinion and comment To take some advantage thx u all :) Deuce asalaamu alaikum brother, first off you shouldnt have posted a new thread for this there is the "toy" thread for that...secondly just for next time this makes you food for the sharks. go simpler start out with writing the alphabet over in plain plain plain letters until you master the proportion then you can add the....whatever you wanna add. im muslim this isnt sarcasm. good luck bro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sayWORD? Posted April 16, 2010 Share Posted April 16, 2010 wouldnt those sheiks cut off your hand or some shit if they caught you painting? save your life and quit while youre ahead. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 17, 2010 Share Posted April 17, 2010 Long live the Ayatollah! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pornoholic Posted April 18, 2010 Share Posted April 18, 2010 kids clearly trolling Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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