ASER1NE Posted December 27, 2001 Share Posted December 27, 2001 its better but still way to complicated , you seriously need to draw straight crisp lines and get your arrows properly porportional and get rid of those weird boxes, bc right now your lines are crappy and your arrows are all different sizes and those boxes suck so it just makes it look hella sloppy........oh yah and if ur gonna colour it make sure you colour inside the lines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Graff Jesus Posted December 27, 2001 Share Posted December 27, 2001 for these sketches i assess you with the following penalties: red and black color scheme - 5 yards abuse of arrows - 15 yards inability to draw straight lines - 10 yards now take these sketches back and redo first down. try starting with simple block letters like so many people have said. go look at some fonts or something. don't try and break rules you haven't even learned. and dammit take those boxes out of your letters! what are they? holes in the letters? part of the fill? shine/highlights on your letters? they are just hurt...please. no more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rental Posted December 27, 2001 Share Posted December 27, 2001 as was said, start simpler. do less complicated letters, work on being cleaner. and yes, strait lines would help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 alright, i finally got a digital camera, so i decided i would add somne of my sketches since i am a beginner also. i have tried to take peoples advice to heart and start off simple, so here are some of the sketches i have been working on. and yeah, i know someone writes zen already, but it's been awhile, and i am going to stick to this name. http://www.ehomebook.com/users/zen77/images/zensketch.JPG'> sorry about the picture, i am still getting used to using the camera. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 here's another one of my sketches... http://www.ehomebook.com/users/zen77/images/zen2.JPG'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 here's some more sketches, i will have a picture of the one below painted, as soon and i can get picture without a huge glare, hopefully by later tonight http://www.ehomebook.com/users/zen77/images/zen5.JPG'> in the ones below i just chose one letter and worked on the structure of that letter, so i could progress with a bunch of letters. http://www.ehomebook.com/users/zen77/images/zen3.JPG'>http://www.ehomebook.com/users/zen77/images/zen6.JPG'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From Autumn Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 the last E is pretty clean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 well...this is as clean as i could get the photo of the painting...but i just wanted to show you guys i actually paint. http://www.ehomebook.com/users/zen77/images/znp.JPG'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Pinche Hoto Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 .....swet.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ASER1NE Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 well the sketches werent that great exept for that last E but the painting was way worse , perhaps its just the photo quality , but it doesnt look as great as the sketch did.........atleast someone is finally listening to what advice is given......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 yeah...the photo was bad, and to top that off, i didnt scan it, i had to take a digital photo of the regular photo, so the quality is pretty much shit, but oh well. i am just trying to take peoples advice and make it work, everyone starts somewhere... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted December 29, 2001 Share Posted December 29, 2001 bump, i am hoping Graff Jesus and some others will assess my beginner sketches and give me some pointers... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garcia_vega Posted October 19, 2003 Share Posted October 19, 2003 well, none of these pics show up for me so i guess i couldn't critique any of them. although, don't they have a section to post sketches on? if these are sketches, they shouldn't be in brickslayers. they should be in paperchase, or as i like to call it the special olympics of 12oz. that way, since no one ever checks that forum, we don't have to subject ourselves to stuff like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KiSe Posted October 19, 2003 Share Posted October 19, 2003 this thread deffinetly needs to be moved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sensnsa Posted October 19, 2003 Share Posted October 19, 2003 i see nothing. i voted wack. ps- isn't this in the wrong forum? sketches? Paper Chase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gfreshsushi Posted October 21, 2003 Share Posted October 21, 2003 i vote wack. but that's cuz i hate straight edge kids. "red x on my fist, now i'm pissed! quick! somebody punch me in the face!" fucking retards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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