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the middle character is good...it looks like you know what your doing with the letters but i'm not really feeling it.

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your getting better young man. Don't waste all your markers on your background. Unless doing a interesting piece or something. Your characters look too much like, "Sabrina the animated series," stuff. Try sketching with pencil alot, then you will develop your own character style. But you are getting better my boy.

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I personally like the background on the first drawing. Very nice. And I enjoy your letters ... post more sketches if you have them.

 

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please don't take this as me being a prick, i'm sure you'd rather have

honesty than sugar coatings, but your characters are

really generic......try and warp them out or something........and get

rid of that b-boy style kind of look.............cuz its really played...............just

my opinion, which doesn't mean shit.....

keep at it.

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Stop using a ruler, and if you dont use one then you have pretty good lines, but put some curves into the letters, the ruler effect doesnt kick.

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Guest platapie

the letters are kinda kool if they are done as huge blockbuster type things. im not really feelign the charcters ethier. but what the hell do i no? im just a hawaiian.

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first someone asked for more pics so here are some..

 

http://comp.me0w.net/art/character.jpg'>

 

http://comp.me0w.net/art/micah.jpg'>

 

http://comp.me0w.net/art/comp2.jpg'>

 

http://comp.me0w.net/art/toy.jpg'>

 

And to answer the other questions, no i don't use a ruler, and i've only been writing since january but i've been drawing for a lot longer. I appreciate your input.

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http://comp.me0w.net/art/comp2.jpg'>

 

I really liked these letters a lot more, but its not so much about the letter, I like the placement. It would look really good painted, the dimensions really kick ass. Impressive type of backround, It looks sloppy (in a good way),it also shows energy and stimulation.

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since january? hah, i fucking quit.

 

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Originally posted by brown twinkie:

please don't take this as me being a prick, i'm sure you'd rather have

honesty than sugar coatings, but your characters are

really generic......try and warp them out or something........and get

rid of that b-boy style kind of look.............cuz its really played...............just

my opinion, which doesn't mean shit.....

keep at it.

 

i agree with what he says about that bboy look being played. its just like, whats the point of wasting all your creative energy drawing something that couldnt be distinguished between a million generic artists. in the music biz, generic shit sells, and the "artists" in turn make loot. but here, i doubt your motive is one of financial gain. i think more people should just let loose what is inside their heads, and stop worrying so much about trying to make it look "graf". on the positive side, i think you definitely have artistic ability, and i would love to see what you might come up with just off the dome.

 

 

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skay.

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...and i wish that girl was real. too cute.

 

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6K

sick.

skay.

:sbc::watp::dab:

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Guest unkyunksalot

do you have letter influences? i like the characters but im not so sure about the poetry. im more of a hai ku man myself

 

burn ing ur eth ra

why does it hurt me so much

may be its the clap.

 

 

thank you

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