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I think I like that first one most. The more solid and less busy background makes the forms on the bottom more striking. I would loose the circles just above the forms on the left. Perfect circles are damn near impossible to convey, but otherwise they tend to look somewhat sloppy and out of place.

 

Just a thought.

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i think on the contrary. i feel that most abstraction is, or should be, extensions of reality, or in an individualistic sense, of the artist's reality. frankly, i don't consider figures being a mix into abstraction but a further reach of what can be abstracted. but that is solely my opinion.

 

i may post some more later.

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Eastswaggings, your work is so mean and aggressive.It is severely obscured. Your work is reminiscent of kline( even though his lines came from obscuring a chair) and wols. ..

.I'm not critiquing it in the measure of good or bad, because there is no such thing as good or bad art....I am merely telling you what I sense when I look at it. ..thank you for the experience. I enjoyed them.

 

Stylism - I like that movement . ...

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You said something about going against your normal work thoughts, or normal concepts. What did you mean by that?

 

Were you opposing yourself intentionally to see what type of creation would result from such a conflict.? ...or was it just a natural transition away from your natural form?

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i appreciate an objective critique rather than a biased one. thank you.

 

What do I know? I never was an art school kid...I'm just some scummy, old graffiti writer. ;)

 

I try not to over analyze. I either like it or I don't.

 

And with that being said, something new from me.

 

GetawayCar.jpg?t=1313792230

Getaway Car

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eastswaggins, i really like both of those but i think the bottom one is workin better. the touches of red and grey are really workin with the abstracted figure, and the varied line weights help make it more... readable? you should keep going with that process, i dont think the burned paper is really necessary though

 

bojangles and poesia, bangin as always

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eastswaggins, i really like both of those but i think the bottom one is workin better. the touches of red and grey are really workin with the abstracted figure, and the varied line weights help make it more... readable? you should keep going with that process, i dont think the burned paper is really necessary though

 

yeah, the burning just permanently erased something unnecessary, but that element itself is unnecessary to the piece. ah, its just a study.

 

here is something new.

Abstraction3.jpg

 

oh and bojangles, poesia, that stuff is looking real good.

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mawks - you are about to make me snap ...I'm trying to hold back from posting some of my latest works ...

 

That is my foundation..lebbeus woods ...I consider my work to be abstract experimental architectural graph. my brain circuits have overloaded.

 

lebbeus was beyond dope. ...

 

those pictures remind me of LEK

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