Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Hello all, New to this forum, found it to be the best forum for writers online, less ignorant and aggressive place than some others.. so thanks... I write Phear and I'm real new to graff, respectfully learning. I am a regular forum user, and have been moderator and admin on various forums in the past. Going to post my first two pieces here if no one minds ;) Been blackbooking for a while, needed to take it to the wall :D This was my first piece, lines pretty blurry, but i was quite happy with it... Wearing a suit because i had to go back the next day for the flick, on the way to college. This karak was done last week, i didnt do the stuff abouve my head, that was my mate who wanted to try the paint.... doh... Also, i had the original artists permission to go over his background, this is a legal wall where shit only lasts a day or two... Like i said, legal wall so im not worried about posting my photo... Planning or hitting the streets once im good enough not to shame myself... Planning on painting all my cash away in the summer, get some skills up :) Anyways, comments, advice, ideas.... All welcome! Thanks. DRP - Phear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lionheart Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 terrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lionheart Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 sorry for the brutal honesty but it really is pretty bad. sketch more before you blow all your money on montana gold Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knim_One Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 steal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AM1610 Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 thats not that bad, i like it. definately not toy... the cubes are dope. and the character is phatty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 The montana gold was gifted to me, but fair enough. I been sketching more since then, thanks for the advice. Also, thanks AM1610 for the positives :) More comments welcome. DRP - Phear EDIT: I didn't do the cubes, those were by a local hero type guy who said i could use it as a background, he had his flick. Doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sketchy. Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Too bad he didn't do those cubes. And sits in front of his pieces. And shows his face. And wastes Montana. To Phear...because you seem polite I will be frank. Don't expect any love at all. Go to the books. Go simple. Practice practice practice. I am not hating, I'm just being blunt rather than being a dick. Close. Edit: there is a toy paint thread floating somewhere. For more precise advice, post there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manic_dm Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 its not very good...the character is ok for being your first and i hate to be a bitch about it.....but ya just work on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manic_dm Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 its a really good fill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 Sketchy - True, you were not a dick, thanks, I can handle harsh criticism, kinda over common in "graffiti culture", anyway. As for standing in front of the pieces, i realise that's lame haha. Only been at this a month or so, and not put in much time, it's all about this summer :D Maniac, thanks for that. (I realise im no one here, but i might politely mention you can edit previous posts if you have shit to add, im a regular forum user so i notice these things hahah :) ) DRP - Phear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnitzel Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 take your self back to your bedroom and then go find somewhere to paint illegally. you're not going to get better painting legal walls. go paint the tracks. how the fuck are you going to start legal and then go hit the streets? and maybe learn to do a tag first sorry for not being positive but it's true . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 Yeah, i have been practising tagging and using markers for about a week now, will post when I have something worth showing. Could be a while HA. DRP - Phear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prawn laksa Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 why is every one being so nice to this doochbag? that shit is terrible... no one wants to see your pitiful attempt, let alone your doochbag mugshot! you really need to re-assess what you want to do with your spare time kid.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 Prawn Laska: People tend to be nice, and give constructive criticism, to those who show respect to those who have gone before, and do not profess to be better than the next guy. I am humble and modest, as a newcomer to this forum and graffiti. I know I'm shit, and anyone with talent would surely not care about me of this thread enough to get mad about it. If I had come onto the forum saying i was good, or expecting skilled artists and writers to say I am good, I would expect that sort of response, but I didn't, I made sure not to tread on anyone's toes :) Just a suggestion as to why people have not been nasty about my low-level attempts at graf. Peace, DRP - Phear EDIT: I'm not being funny, but maybe people have been nice because I don't call strangers erm.. "doochbag". ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awkward eye Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awkward eye Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Hello all, once im good enough not to shame myself... you already did that. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 Haha, oh well, we all start somewhere I guess heh. :rolleyes: DRP - Phear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prawn laksa Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 i know 'people tend to be nice' buddy, but where did you get the impression that writers were? if you cant handle a bit of flack on the internerd you wont last a minute in the game. and yes 'we all start somewhere', but most are honest enough to themselves to realise that nobody at all wants to see that stuff... and if you want to 'show respect to those who have gone before' do us all a favour and neck up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 Are writers not people? I can handle flack, and will expect alot from you as I post my progress :) If "nobody at all wants to see that stuff...", feel free to ignore threads started by me, hehe :D Any other comments on what I have done are welcome. Peace to all. DRP - Phear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*PROTOCOL* Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 That shit sucks so bad, why do you "practice" wit that expensive ass paint. I would just start all over with a new name and never look back on this. I mean, you might as well be painting with rollerblades on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killa Raem Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 wow thats so funny Im posting it in the trebbile graffiti thread, unless someone else already did, wow thats fuckin shitty ass graff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xlando Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 i wish i was just GIVEN montana. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rezske Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 nice tie faggot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commando Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Niggaz tryin to learn how to drive in a manual 997 GT3......fuck outta here. Get a beater Civic to learn how to drive stick shift. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uatu1999 Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 DiS niGgAz TagGInG SkILLz Iz Da BomB Yo! DaT TyE is GaYnGSta 2 DeAtH! Read some books, study your scene! View actual graffiti and stop being a fucking homo ass emo bitch. You suck. Go cry or some shit, Sally. Graff isn't (nor will it ever be) your thing. Honestly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr_Placebo Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 Im glad people like the tie. I will be modelling this tie, and more on fuckingsexyties.com soon. Watch this space. ;) DRP- Phear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
itsokaykiddo Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 fuck must be nice montanas and shit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeeeeeeee Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 horrible, keep at it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sypheruppercut Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Ha ha. Fuck me this thread is funny. All based on those 2 flix but jokes. Although not as amusing as just criticism my constructive criticism would be to start with markers. Clear, simple letters. Simple letters. Dont start fuckin with arrows or extensions till you can drop a simple handstyle or dub letter. Ignore the characters as well. Those are supplementry. And expect to get lined and rinsed for about our first 2 years. At least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOTTS1 Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 you gimp, how much are the police paying you to show your ugly oasis looking mug on here by the way? go suck your dad off the chief of britsh transport police because he is not happy that you been rumbled slag... if i saw you with that tie on around the way i would strangle you with it, take your shit, cross your piece then throw ya in front of a train!!!... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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