AOS Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 i wanna fuk one of your animales Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 much appreciated freak. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 LEast mr tv is somewhat using bars to construct his letters, thats better then most toy first pieces. the arrows are doo doo though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 some old shit i painted i guess i inprove a lil? crits or thougths Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 The K looks dumb havuing two bars stick out of the right side of the left bar, make it so there is only one join point not two. But I kinda do like where you are heading with that,. bottom ones proably my fav there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 ^thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 that mosk is fuckin hot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 been experimenting with extensions, bits and openings a lot with this structure, thoughts? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 did it without the sketch walmart dollars and stock tips ftw[: critique it all please:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 that sgb is the best thing i've seen you paint. you should try some kade's in that style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 oh, that was what soan did, disregard my last comment then. kade, it seems like on a lot of your stuff you're not using bars or taking the time to fix your proportions. if i were you i'd find a chill place to practice proportions, can control and letter structure. remember to keep it simple at first, once you've got the basics down then you can start adding your own style and flair. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 hahaha i know i hate those straigth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 just keep doing it man, practice as often as possible and you'll improve Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 oh, that was what saon did, disregard my last comment then. kade, it seems like on a lot of your stuff you're not using bars or taking the time to fix your proportions. if i were you i'd find a chill place to practice proportions, can control and letter structure. remember to keep it simple at first, once you've got the basics down then you can start adding your own style and flair. is your opinion any different now that you know I(saon) did it? haha. just wondering(: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 i HATE how my name came out. the proportions were all fucked up and my lines were nowhere near clean. but theres a brighter flick of the SGB and SAON(: 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 haha, no not at all, i like that letter structure, i was giving advice to kade, telling him to try that style more, then i realized that you did it, not him, which made my initial comment make no sense at all. i like that style though, it's simple but has a lot of personality. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeadingEdge Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 came off pretty cool i think. got dark before finishing so it's not as clean as i would have liked. thoughts? Bump argus. RedEyedAnimal, nice improvement! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeadingEdge Posted March 17, 2011 Share Posted March 17, 2011 crits? That first Renk is pretty flawless, I would just try and make the handstyle easier to read. The Exuts are a little too.. lumpy and strange? Also, when doing shadow, don't have it cover up part of a piece. Try doing bar letters or noodley hot dog letters, you have the can control. Or a throw-up, but not a mix of both, thats my 2 cents... quick simple for talking Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 i got you man, your two cents are much appreciated. i kind of like the idea of that structure kind of taking the role of both a piece and a throwup, just because it's something i can bang out in ten minutes but it's more refined then a throw. i see where you're coming from though, and there's always room for improvement and growth, so i'll tweak it a bit, maybe make one version a more obvious piece and another a straight up throw. and i like that aside. i think if the I were the only thing that was lowercase it'd be a little more balanced though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 i feel its good, a capital e woulda been to much.. i need a good chill spot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted March 19, 2011 Share Posted March 19, 2011 crits? Looks good to me bro... I like how that top one looks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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stayposi831 Posted March 20, 2011 Share Posted March 20, 2011 .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 20, 2011 Share Posted March 20, 2011 ..... KADE ONE: ANM-SMG^^^^^^^^^ work in progress^^^^^ ...... SAON ONE: ANM*SGB^^^^^^^ decided to try something with and E ahaha crits and advice please(: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted March 20, 2011 Share Posted March 20, 2011 bit on the S doesn't fit, and all the wavy bits on top of the saen seem without purpose. also on the kade, smaller D, which is open ended, is lonely. and why is the E a different color on both? i actually think the E on the kade is pretty tight though. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 the bits at the top may make more sense if there were pieces of the letters being torn off of them or something. and with that saen the bottom part of the e needs to be shorter so the legs of the n can be seen more clearly. also, kade, you've got the right idea, but when actually painting it pay close attention to the width of your letters, and i'd like to see that structure with an e that matches. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted March 21, 2011 Share Posted March 21, 2011 Yea I know but is was hard to step back and check because of all the rocks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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