esoD1 Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gray matter Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 i like the N. maybe get rid of the extension on the T on the yellow one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 vise, watch your 3d and drop shadows. aside from the top one, all of your letters could use some work, and make sure the width and height of your letters are consistent throughout. scrap the squiggly highlights too. not trying to come down on you or anything, just trying to help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 nayto goes HARD! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 werd nayto has a solid style...dude i wanna see how more complex u can get. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prodigiouse Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 that B has mad flow, but the rest is lacking flow. Study the B and change the others to work the same way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 blah blah blah. "i know how to crit on forums" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Vossy Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 I'll grab a better pic later. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gray matter Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 nice fill, i'd get rid of the pointy bits on the top of the V and Y, and make the bottom of the V flat, but that's just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 think you can make your lines any more shaky lookin? and that mini throw is total shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted July 22, 2010 Share Posted July 22, 2010 no one asked you, man who doesnt write. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Finesse Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 You know you are bound to get crits whenever you post your stuff. Dont take them personal. I like what you were aiming for, but some parts are too sloppy. And you always seem to over-do the 'L", which in my opinion kills the flow of the piece. That Vossy fill is nice. And REAM. I think you should quit using ironlaks and montanas, and stick to some Rustos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 I'll grab a better pic later. nice fill, im digging the colors, but have you ever thought of dropping one of the s's, and just writing vosy. i think that might make it easy for you, i personally hate and avoid dealing with double letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AER TK Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 vise, watch your 3d and drop shadows. aside from the top one, all of your letters could use some work, and make sure the width and height of your letters are consistent throughout. scrap the squiggly highlights too. not trying to come down on you or anything, just trying to help hahah the squiggly hi lites are cool tho.. maybe not on that piece but they definitely work sometimes so don't ditch em forever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 hahah the squiggly hi lites are cool tho.. maybe not on that piece but they definitely work sometimes so don't ditch em forever i completely agree, i just don't think he's ready to use them yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prodigiouse Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 And REAM. I think you should quit using ironlaks and montanas, and stick to some Rustos. ive never used ironlaks, pretty much krylons and montanas, and this is pretty much my second piece ever so i still got a long way to go, and its "BEAM" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
esoD1 Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 BUMP Vossy.... super crisp fill in. Unique style. Props. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freeofcharge Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 i always enjoy seeing vossy's pieces. keep getting better dude, i like where ur goin. sybil, cool concept on the first pic, keep workin on can control to get crisp lines tryna get back in the groove from being mia for a while 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 i know the feeln 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted July 24, 2010 Share Posted July 24, 2010 i always enjoy seeing vossy's pieces. keep getting better dude, i like where ur goin. sybil, cool concept on the first pic, keep workin on can control to get crisp lines tryna get back in the groove from being mia for a while gnarly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted July 25, 2010 Share Posted July 25, 2010 feeling that nato throw and the last freak piece posted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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