I2_IE_I3_IE_IL Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Thanks bro i just don't Fuck with pg too much anymore cause the sites always down and its just not that active anymore but im still around doing my thing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Good to know. yeah pg sucks for that and the fact that it was the birthing place of that Jack kid that sketches dane now i think. I've gotten feckin tired of every forum but this one but I'm probably just going in circles. anyways good shit dude you should keep dem flicks coming! also I was looking back though and saw that show fill in and thought damn....how can he piece so well and do throws so bad? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 dude has a LOT of chill spots he can just fuck around with, not a street side bomber I don't think. He's got some mean letters all over though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawdog502 Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja x status Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Raw dog you need to do simple straight letters. Every letter is made of bars and/or half circles. Use them to make your letters. My pm isn't working so I couldn't reply to your message. But Forreal do very simple plain straight letters it'll save you a world of trouble later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Raw dog you honestly don't even need to touch paint. Now I know everyone is shaky when they start with cans but it's obvious that you don't have much of an understanding of lettering yet and it's a total waste of time for you to paint. especially if it's illegally, could you imagine getting popped for doing shit like that? ninjas right on the straight letters too. just sketch them though. if you wanna find a good bomb you should probably watch shit tons of bombing videos to see all the different throw flavors, don't straight up bite letters but learn what looks good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawdog502 Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 Thanks ninja^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 fucking hate my peers sometimes... quick freestyle. bit of a bite from the wane/trike flick but it's a pretty common font. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 That's a damn nice piece for this thread. I think the most noticeable spot that could use improvement is the top left highlight, It doesn't flow right with the bar and I don't think it does with the light source either...but I couldn't sketch a perfected version sooooooo take it for what it is I know it's dark but it's still visible there's that and this one from earlier crits? which do you like more? just came up with that fat one randomly but with a little more attention to detail I think it would be nicer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted April 3, 2012 Share Posted April 3, 2012 the one with all the letters the same size. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted April 8, 2012 Share Posted April 8, 2012 the letters on that khan throw need work but the piece is pretty badass. I wish I was closer to that wall. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted April 9, 2012 Share Posted April 9, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 bump the shit outta these khans nc currently destroying this thread.....even if this post is overkill XD critses welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 bump the shit outta these khans ******** currently destroying this thread.....even if this post is overkill XD critses welcome edit your post if you can... you're missing highlights in several spots, bottoms of all the letters, and drop the arrows on the outside of the piece, they aren't doing anything to support the structure. Colors are decent, but if you highlight in white, don't make the forcefield white, use the best contrasting color in the fill of the piece. Dark blue would be nice if the splash was a light blue or something. Study the color wheel. Keep all your letters the same size, the E on the last one is too small. When I started piecing, I drew a grid underneath the piece to keep everything even, and covered it with the splash. Not needed anymore, but it helps the eye to train to see what is even. I have an aversion to arrows when people start painting. If you can't balance letters, the arrows mean nothing and are just an extension of your penis. Don't take enzyte. Handstyle is pretty good, do it over and over until you like it more, try to make each letter one stroke. Same with the throw, make each letter simple strokes and try to make it as fast as possible. I've been drinking, so don't expect crits like this often. This is me opening up to help a new kid, not something i usually do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 i like that black filled throw on top of this page . few wack tosses . gota trry an bring middle of the u down further when painting . IMG276 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG271 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG270 by centrysams, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gray matter Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 it looks like the middle of the U is getting interrupted by the right side of the H, if you make it wider that should help. the last two look more like Y's than U's but it should be easy to fix Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 a little action 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 Very bad with the cans... especially getting a clean out line. also drips... did the white (flat rusto) not shake or the black still wet (lowes dollar paint) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AZTEKA Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 not bad man, just keep your hand movin at a constant motion. that vshk straight is whats up. and humor that first throw looks good, better than the rest, not hatin man just my opinion, and sper your gettin the idea of it just keep practicing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 Shitty picture I know but any thoughts shared would be nice Think I fucked up on choosing a blue shade for the outline, doesn't contrast well with the 3d and fill. other than that idk.....guess it just needs to get clean. At this point I'm just trying to freestyle simps and do what comes to mind, feel like that's a good avenue. I feel like I'm starting to get to that point where progress slows down a lot, which is cool, it happens in everything, but it's annoying. Maybe I'm just depressed who knows. Anyways, hope all is well for the toys that actually do shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 you should have done a forcefield in the color that contrasted the outline the most. You're also still missing a lot of highlights (back left part of the s, Bottom left on the E, Middle top of the S, and more precision on all of it). The leg of the R looks off bad, way too fat. You're 3d's off too, i'll let you try to figure that out If you can't learn it on your own, you won't be able to figure out shit in the future. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 also watch your bar width, try to keep it consistent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted May 8, 2012 Share Posted May 8, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted May 16, 2012 Share Posted May 16, 2012 Unfortunately i only have these blurry photos.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dcor8 Posted May 17, 2012 Share Posted May 17, 2012 @colorkiller, Im feeling that K a lot man, shit came out nice! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted May 17, 2012 Share Posted May 17, 2012 looks a bit wonky to me 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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