mind617 Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 was that number 8 a stencil? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 seke, the fill looks good, and the e's look much more uniform, but the s is disproportional to the rest of the letters. i think i'd open the top loop of the s up, and maybe kick the top of the k back in. i think that it's a huge improvement from the other stuff i've seen though. and like i said, that fill's cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 SEKERONE: come on man, when some one takes their time to give advise PLEASE take notes and APPLY it. you are still doing things to complex for your ability. you seem to get the idea of straight letters, but you are still distorting letters to much. there is a reason that you need to master straights before you start doing stuff similar to this ^^^. Your basic letter structure needs ALOT of work, the main issue being that your width of your letters is inconsistent. the colors are better than the last one, but in the beginning there is nothing wrong with black and white. you dont really need to be worrying about color scheme and interesting fills right now, just focus on getting your hand steady and your letters consistent. at this point you need to be sketching every day and painting as much as possible. if you apply this tips you will slowly see yourself start to improve. graffiti is a labor of love and practice, you have to put the time in before you start to more complex stuff. p.s if you are in the southern part of the east coast you might consider changing your name. there is a nc head the wrote SEK and other variations of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 payback's 100% right, but that fill's still pretty trippy haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SekerOne Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 thanks stealth, but payback man im not trying to be a dick but i went through your posts and saw u hadnt posted anything uve painted. lets see some shit mane! i appreciate the crit though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted August 21, 2010 Share Posted August 21, 2010 Seriously Bud, if 10 people give you the same advice then chances are its good thing to listen to reason. All paybacks crits were genuine and truthful yet it seems your unwilling to apply any of them unless he posts some flicks. Is it not ok to have an opinion or to try to help someone out? Stop following the masses of ignorance on here and take good advice when its given, it will make you a better writer in the long run and earn you more respect when you start churning out clean work. I do agree the fill is the best part of that piece but i also believe it looks like you are trying to handle more skill than you have collected, step up, listen up and learn. You wont regret it later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garw Posted August 22, 2010 Share Posted August 22, 2010 was that number 8 a stencil? if youre talking about my number 8 it's not a stencil - just NUMBER is a stencil, if you dont then sory... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhMyGosh! Posted August 22, 2010 Share Posted August 22, 2010 All rusto. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted August 22, 2010 Share Posted August 22, 2010 omg= its always all rusto!! lmao sooo dope yo keep it up, u dont even need to be posting in here. Garw, i was talking to you. i asked b/c it looked real dope. if it was a stencil i was thinking it was one of the best ive seen (cause i hate em). And i was thinking if it was a painting, "thats what the fuck is up right there" lmao. its really smooth and if u check your CP i hadda prop that. few of yall got em. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 All rusto. <3 clean. Rusto is where its at! Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 the fill is nice, 3d is cool. Letters, ehhhhhh. Work on your letters. your shading/misting is nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 mised a spot Letters are nice, fill is clean. Lets see some work on 3d. What you did is fine, but if you add some color in the 3d your work this would be perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 simple freestyle im liking the hand at the moment.. got a hold of ny skinnys and rustos..so unlike the previous peice i posted this is cleaner and more colorfull...trying to do simples...just so i can focus on fades and such.. Shades are awesome, sorry but your R bothers the shit out of me. other then that its nice, awesome K! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 for my ARU niggahs back home in the AlohaState! Dude I Like everything I have seen on this thread by you, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 :cool: I dont know about the "sparkles," while air brushing you practice dots and daggers. With graffiti its backwards, grab a pink dot and practice. Your fill is cool, I like the colors. Keep the photos coming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SITERONERISM Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 everyone really needs to get out of the mindset that you should perfect simples before starting more complex shit, its fucking stupid. practicing wilder stuff will teach you more about proportion and techniques than doing fucking straights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhMyGosh! Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 everyone really needs to get out of the mindset that you should perfect simples before starting more complex shit, its fucking stupid. practicing wilder stuff will teach you more about proportion and techniques than doing fucking straights. I think that its important for somebody starting out to get a firm grasp on straight letters before moving on to more complex things..however, a firm grasp, is far from perfection. Learn to walk before you can run. Having said that, the only way to improve, is to push yourself, which often means painting something ugly as fuck and sorting out the kinks as you go along. But, that does require a solid foundation to reflect back on, otherwise, there is no reference point. Its a learning process. I dunno. Site, i think i agree with you though...you bring up a good point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devour_One808 Posted August 23, 2010 Share Posted August 23, 2010 Dude I Like everything I have seen on this thread by you, keep it up! thanks mann! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SITERONERISM Posted August 24, 2010 Share Posted August 24, 2010 ohmygosh..i can see wher your coming from but i never really practised straights at all. sure my early shit looked ugly as fuck. but i found i improved really quickly from painting wilder stuff, then when it came to do straights i already understood letter structure n preportions,and also what works and what doesnt. but i understand everyones different.come to think of it i think youl get better at what you practise at nomatter what,i just thought about it and i could rock a decent pice before i could do decent tags. heres a picture for all my pointless ranting,il leave the thread alone now. [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted August 24, 2010 Share Posted August 24, 2010 site has really dope shit, and i can see both points. Whatever you practice the most, you will excel at. In either case, the intention is to build structure and understanding. I like to do wild toy shit a lot, and when i hit a block i step back to simple straights. Expand and condense, understand the letters and gain a personal appreciation for them. And gain all of this knowledge before you get yourself into trouble for doing some dumb lookin shit. Or get into trouble once, and then hit the books until people tell you that you have some style. Then, back to the streets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted August 24, 2010 Share Posted August 24, 2010 i understand were both sides are coming from, im not siding with one or the other. your whole progression in graffiti is really determined by how talented of an individual you are. for someone that can draw already, has had art training, starting with simples is not need for the most part. for someone that has trouble drawing basic shapes and other basic things, starting with simple is the best thing for them. i didnt really spend much time on simples when i started out. i have stepped back and re visited them here lately for the fuck of it. in my opinion starting complex is ruff, its very disheartening to work very hard on something you think is really good and then have a veteran writer tell you it sucks. but you can deal with the constant build up and let down, by all means start with complex stuff. i just think its easier for new writers to start with simples rather than getting discourage before they ever get really started. yeah it might take longer but i think the time is well spent. Just my 2 cents, not trying to step on any toes and that SITE is nice and trippy :nut: :nut: :nut: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted August 24, 2010 Share Posted August 24, 2010 or let the shitty newbs start with wilds, get discouraged and quit. That's ok too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hilarious Posted August 24, 2010 Share Posted August 24, 2010 wow this page actually has better shit than the BOSTON one! keep it toy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted August 24, 2010 Share Posted August 24, 2010 post up or shut up duke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SekerOne Posted August 24, 2010 Share Posted August 24, 2010 the fill is nice, 3d is cool. Letters, ehhhhhh. Work on your letters. your shading/misting is nice. thanks mane, im working on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 good color choices bud but the letters are all different widths c and the u are the best ones out of the bunch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddaWadda Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 ^^ agreed, also that orange scribble is ugly. other than that, everything is fairly clean. try cutting back to sharpen your corners Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Crunch Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 ^^ looks good. nice colors. agreed with the widths. I like the scribble too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garw Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 Uploaded with ImageShack.us first time cought by police...main trouble was - what does it mean...are there anny political conotation, religious or what, why number 9, why black stars etc...in trouble now, but thats it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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