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so sick of ppl callin this an enlightened society

when i see women and children frieghtened beside me

i dont know what to do with these feelings inside me

actions speak louder than words but mine might surprise me

its time to stop clear my mind and think wisely dont wanna rush to judgement and do somthing stupid

gotta keep in control gotta keep it lucid

my voice feels unseen

like a piece of paper translucent

transparent

crowds of protesters with dark eyes starin

the cops respond with tear gas and megaphones blarin

get off the streets or we'll really tear in

but the people dont move aint nobody scarin

little do they know the situation theyre in

from around the back

the cops start to attack

innocent citizens gettin whacked gettin hacked

the lights go out and all is black

the journey begins , the long journey back

to the beginning laid on my mommas lap

where innocence and love arent assumed

they are matter of fact

i see my whole life unfold , it was gone in a flash

from the school days with my graduate class

to the cold pavement outside taking out the trash

but all that is gone and now i must walk my own path

suddenley i realize this is moment i dread

my life has been ended ,ive been slain, i am dead

atleast i am proud of the life i have led

heaven or hell which one shall i tread

which do i deserve

which shall be my bed

but my fears are at rest ....

visions of peace in my head

ive gotten the best for i see jesus ahead

 

 

man its late i suk and im goin to bed

theres my two cents.....peace 4 tonite

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i move around alot

bouncin from state to state

get into in trouble so have to relocate and start a clean slate

i'm known as the innerstate space wrangler

end up in massachusetts and get more rep than the boston strangler

CapPeeler aka the channel zero mind tangler

nothing to do today so i'll ride my bike downtown

lock it up and walk around

i got plots and plans

cruisin the streets with both pistols drawn like yo samminy sams

hittin up all the walls, poles, and trash cans

shit is rough down here-section 8 and not any caucasions

what you expect its sw atlanta

drug dealers & pimps everywhere rockin bandanas

hangin on the corners blastin their radios' w/ tin foil antennas

they just watch the police ride by and say "they can't touch-us"

while the undercovers creep thru on the marta-bus

watchin the block and try to recruit snitches they can trust

to try and make anotha bust

its a nonstop game of cat and mouse

keep one sell on you and the rest stashed behind wafflehouse

continue to chase the paper while listening to shortee & faust

at the end of day holla at the cru

go back to the crib-drink & have a barbecue

later go hit up club kaya,majic city, & mjq

 

404 can fondalin'

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h to the izzo v to the izz a,

for sheezy my neezy used to dribble down in va.

how many licks does it take to get to the center of a blow pop and its gonnatake a miracle to drive a car this colour down imperial yeah i got heart but i anit trying ta see marcia clark.....

 

hahaha yu yeai!!!!!!!!! westside connection with wroing words and snoop dooggggggggggggggggggggieeeeeeeee

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yo its gouged out and my neezy cme/ knock your crowns out and ya weezing deeply/we suck the life out you/ fuck with us knock ya lights out too/ couple of screwed up youths/spit rhymes and we'll spit our food up too/wednesday's opposite day right? so we wish we were good like you/ so really we're your wack as fuck/ so start backin up/dont start actin up or youll get your eyes blackin up/youd need a whole crew of guys attacking us/we got mad energy, its like beating crack addicts up/ been rhymin a couple months and already got the mics on our arms/ the true GOAT rhymes are like ignitin a bomb/ we dont give a fuck, catch us fightin ya mom/no record out and its already triple platinum/suckas try the zone defense, we dribbled passed em/#1 cause of crippled bastards/ the coalition/ fuck with us you could have your colon missin/ rip through your anatomy/ screamin in agony/ kill gay people and you look like a fag to me/with the aide of gravity we'll stomp through ya chest cavity/you need a bullet proof vest and a jeep/defend your honor against the 2-man army of carnies/ keep your rhymes in a palm V them call me/ have your rhymes readily available/i spit anthrax, its deadly and its mailable

 

i guess thats enough for now

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Re: Gouged Out.....

 

Originally posted by 455

those last 2 lines in your stuff above were ill....sick.

i try, man. but only the last 2 lines? i typed a phat ass paragraph of shit and the last 2 lines is all i got? na, that means i gotta try harder-get grimier throughout. compliments will only help me grow.

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GOUGED OUT....

 

Nah man, your paragraph was dope...what I meant was those last 2 lines were an ill way to end it...they went together perfect..That kind of shit will give a death blow to someone that's not paying attention..keep it up..stuff is sick.peace.

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this was the first time i took the time to read other peoples' rhymes besides mine and tease's. i must say i am happy to see there are people who actually talk about something. i always said to myself that if i ever become a true hiphop artist, i would have some kind of message. something i need to work on for sure. right now, i just killing people-definitely not me-and got some complex rhyming-definitely me, simple rhymes are too boring. would anyone buy my cds if i had any out?

 

455-its love.

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Gouged Out..

 

Thanks bro..I actually have a joint I'm working on right now titled "non-cents"..it should be done early next year..like in February or something..if you want one,I'll send you a copy..I also noticed you are from Vegas..I don't know any people who write down there but I used to have some friends that lived in Henderson.I used to live about an hour away from there for a few years...does Laughlin,Nv. ring a bell?...you know..the casinos along the river..anyways peace..hit me with an e-mail if you want...vintage455@hotmail.com.

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Re: Gouged Out..

 

Originally posted by 455

Thanks bro..I actually have a joint I'm working on right now titled "non-cents"..it should be done early next year..like in February or something..if you want one,I'll send you a copy..I also noticed you are from Vegas..I don't know any people who write down there but I used to have some friends that lived in Henderson.I used to live about an hour away from there for a few years...does Laughlin,Nv. ring a bell?...you know..the casinos along the river..anyways peace..hit me with an e-mail if you want...vintage455@hotmail.com.

 

yeah we got some kids writing here. right now, you cant go anywhere without seeing RIDL, SEUSS, ROACH. theres more that i cant think about right now. my boys eccept for FUSE-went to the army like a dumbass. Laughlin-you lived there? sorry for you. alright man, ill hit you up one day but dont count on it. you can send me you rhymes. sucka_mc@killamail.com

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This is some bullshit right here.....

ain't no motherfucking pulpit you queer!!

I can't hear nothing you're saying .............

Fake ass MC "You know you're playing 'cause you can't be serious!!"

Gotta be delirious spitting about "real cats" and "Gouged Out CD's"

I steal cats energy and bring 'em to their knees like Kryptonite

do to Superman........ You got a battle plan?? Bring it my man!

I'm a Marvel comic hero down to my last neuron........

don't look at me kid, 'cause you gets smashed like croutons......

Just a crumb and you know it.......

Can't even spit elementary rhymes.......

Your vocab shows it.........

I rep the type of cat that you really wanna be .........

Talk about guns and bats like you're fucking Willie D

Oh let me see?!?! You even know the Geto Boys??

You get buried "Six Feet Deep" after I "Scar faces" on you toys.....

Hasbro, Micro Machines and Parker Brothers......

I could go on and on....you want some others???

Are you and Teaser friends or really faget lovers???

Well let me check....and I ain't talking about your privates........

You get ripped to pieces in a milli-sec kinda like Ryan......

Gotta be lying saying "You're holding weight?"

Much bigger than you, probably about 6'8........

and 220 in lbs...........

long winded and spitting rounds.........

don't try to hide when I'm ripping microphones 'cause your BOUND

to feel my sounds!!

What now????

 

 

Let's get it going Gouged Out..........

A little friendly something over here to get this started again...........

You're constantly spitting so let's get this thread juiced again........

What do you say??

:king:

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Do the math like multiplication and addition

subraction and division

drop lyrics hotter than the fire in Hells' kitchen

mission aborted

visions distorted

the world as we know it

axis contorted

no need to blow up

I already exploded

with a series of collective

recollected perspectives

meaningless objectives with no boundries

over words I never stumble

always stayed humble

never went looking for trouble it just found me

it seems everywhere I go

it's always around me

pathetic domestic disturbances

ladies and gentleman

"Please fasten your seatbelts!..we are experiencing turbulance"

 

.....oh well,that's all I have for now...

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what do i say?

 

you picked the wrong one boring bastard/ fuck with me get your body torn and fractured/ripp you both ways, fowards and backwards/ see in my rhymes i kill mad people/ dont matter, skinny, ugly, fat people/ you, you just another statistic/ gouged out, the only one who spits rounds out like my mouth got gats in it/ you fuckin wack ass rapper/ get killed in the battle and your back cracked after/ youre too wack for me to battle/talkin this bla bla get your head cracked by me and shattered/ youre 220 lbs of dead weight/ when im done with you, youll have a lead face/ i told you, id smoke you/i kill suckas like im spose to/ i do the dirty work and tease'll clean the remains/ easy job, only things left of you is your slpeen and ya brains/ im kinda mean in a way/ but your wack ass rhymes was like slappin me in the face

 

Judges?

 

dont worry, i didnt change any rhymes or nothing, just a misspelling that would fuck up a line

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seattle - tocoma

fuck smell, feel the aroma

after readin this shitt you'll be in an instant coma

life long machine support

until we unplug that bitch from the port

then you outta luck-

stuck & str8 fucked

we forgot about your partna that had the pistol tucked

he be history like your lil bitch that just sucked......

my dick, you lil bitch ass trick

you prolly wack dick while watchin a titty flick

while i stay in the cut w/ one eye covered like slick rick

just break yo neck nigga.....break yo neck nigga

we gonna have a contest like nas & jigga

and....boooom. i just pulled the trigga

oops. anotha statistic or just anotha figure

either or it doesn't matter

i deliver my lyrics on a silver platter

like the spoon your mamma used to feed you

and now you claim your broke, ghetto, and got cru

your discontinued,done, straight thru

you still caught up in high school

don't get pussy so your balls turn blue

fuck the taliban rule- my boys cap & peel rule

try to interfere with any tactic or tool

i'll have you ridin the short bus -fuckin fool

i gots go now for lil while

so pick up a pencil and develop a new style

you the type that introduces yourself as writer

like a rich boy sportin harley gear swearin he a biker..outeeeee.

peace muthafuckas------->dirty south hospitality.

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i ponder the verses

while your bitch fondles my balls

my words come swifter & stronger than all ya'lls

i creep in the cut like a teranchala when it crawls

and operate like a 007 all black ninja

you didn't just say you didn't get past 10th grade did ya

could tell by your word play you weren't too brite

shit rhymed but made no since- wasn't even ite

all that talk and shit aint even tyte

i just started 2 weeks ago on this website

maybe i suck and don't know whats up

bottom line is i don't give a fuck

 

whutcha got..

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rhymes complex/advantanced technology not even at comdex/ fuck a bomb threat/ i make bomb promises/ im in outer space, blow the earth up with a trace with you mom on this dick/itll be my greatest accomplishment/ took over the world and demolished it/i get crazy like that sometimes/ get me mad slash your fucking throat with one rhyme/ chop up niggas like coke fiends cut lines/i told you/i get loco with these vocals/you cant swallow it all, my shitll choke you/ all murder, death type shit/ you get mudered and end up dead when you read my shit/tease, the partner in crime/finds out your flight departure and time/ so i could meet you at the airport with my airforces and stomp in your bare throat/i do this shit, i dont say it to scare folks/ just went crazy

 

another spelling error that would make something not make sense

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shew fly shew

you and your rhymes carry no weight like morning dew

i'll slaughter you in sessions 1 and 2

you will be kicked off this board b/c your skillz never get higher

you should voluntarilly retire

if not i'll clamp your vocal chords w/ a vice grip plier

through gas on you and set you on fire

your a str8 clown,dumb as fuck like you lost your marbles tumblin in the dryer

full blast- all cotton-maximum heat

can't even hold your own ground on your own 2 feet

go ahead tally this one up as a defeat.....

 

short & sweet

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that little nigga johnny rebel here

introducin ya to the funk, loud and clear

bitch you better give me one more beer

i dont care if i rhyme or not

cause im gaurenteed to rock this shit and make it hot

hotter than the bread your burnin in the toaster

you fanny, well, lets just say im gonna roast her

im a loose goose

so dont get me started

ill fuck your chest until you end up broken hearted

like that nigga the duke of york im from down south

so lemme freshen up my style before i put it in your mouth

ill fuckin

ill fuckin

ill fuckin

sew your asshole shut and keep feedin you

and feedin you

this rhyme is wachk and retarded too.

im not gonna stop though

cuz i just began

give me the gun and fly my ass to iran

oh woops the wars in afghanistan..

give me the mic and ill blow it up faster than the fuckin taliban.

take minks off

take things off

take chains off

take rings off

braclets and shit

everything off

...hold on i didnt write that last part

thosse rhymes weren't very calculated from the start

im gonna just stop now cuz this isnt goin anywhere....

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cappeeler/ youre wack and you cant rap either/did you foget-yeah you must of caught amnesia/ dumbass tryna rhyme/you should of just cut and pasted some of mine/our rhymes carry no weight/your shit is helium, make it seem like theres 10 pound snow flakes/your rhyme are could become lines of jokes made/and theyre not even good jokes, theyre dumb/im not even gonna try anymore. there, done.

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just suck my dick punk fucka

no room to talk-but had to- typical young sucka

gouged out -who the fuck are you

lemme tell you summin son

you finished off perfect by sayin- done.

earn a living by emptying out slot machines

lil bitches like you can't handle life so have to take multiple vaccines

diagnosed- manic depressive bipolar disorder

hide behind the internet-run for the borders

work the strip day in/out loading & unloading quarters

by night back to mommy/daddys takin orders

your shit doesn't make any fuckin sense-straight garbage

"im in outer space, blow the earth up with a trace with you mom on this dick"

what the fuck is that shit

come on- you claim to be a loco/crazy/skilled mc and can't rap a lil bit

you pushin over 700 posts

don't deliver dick- and you the one that boasts

pussy as muthafucka i got you surrounded from coast to coast

you'll be dead soon & i'll spread your ashes over the las vegas strip-like butter on toast

"murder,death,bomb promises,just went crazy"

shut the fuck up with that outerspace shit tryin to impress me

i gauge out your other two eyes and leave you needin' back surgery

if you had one nice line it would be a case of pergury

talk like you this that and a veteran

your already in to deep- up to ya neck in quicksand

mudd bubbles poppin at your nose

you just frustrated because your style sucks dick and mine atleast flows

stay on your toes sucka muthafucka you bout to experience true definition "droppin boes"

by a dirty south representative rippin shit from las vegas,mid west, to the poconos.

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tough guys on the internet

blah blah blah they went,

yappin

keep actin

aint no reality here

a little self conscience?

dont worry

not a heart beat here.

not even bad breath coming from the blow hards

the same internet guys aka the social reatards

cant front,

cause really i'm one too.

spent far too many nights,

6 am still reading you

12 oz your the bane of my existence

cut off my sleeping schedule,

drowsy's merely past tense.

the work day drags on "why you so tired?" is the question

pretty much embarassed of my internet ingestion

but enough,

computers arent my life

even though i cant escape them even with the luddite knife.

it adds a little pepper to my graffiti t.v. dinner

nightly, daily, yearly clawing to be the winner

of what? like minded accolades?

arent these the same people who are allready on my page?

we including I should cater our ego message

legible with hate! for those who need our vantage

point

pinnacle

the top of the mountain

the views so good up here he shouts

so sure

so clear

he has no doubt

go ahead, come on, try and walk with us down here!

ive got some shoes for you to fill

come and walk with us down here!

fear you say, thats all youve got?!

we built the mountain and all youve bought.

with your red money, blood red soooo funny

world trade center comes down and YOUR nose is runny?

cant complain when your to blame, WHO'S name?

YOUR name, MY name its all the same.

consumers like WE,

buying, eating, fucking all we see

its us, sheer numbers, this world can not afford

too many human rats up on this god damn message board.................

 

-jerk182 (first timer. nice shit everyone quite inspiring)

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Originally posted by Jerk182

tough guys on the internet

blah blah blah they went,

yappin

keep actin

aint no reality here

a little self conscience?

dont worry

not a heart beat here.

not even bad breath coming from the blow hards

the same internet guys aka the social reatards

cant front,

cause really i'm one too.

spent far too many nights,

6 am still reading you

12 oz your the bane of my existence

cut off my sleeping schedule,

drowsy's merely past tense.

the work day drags on "why you so tired?" is the question

pretty much embarassed of my internet ingestion

but enough,

computers arent my life

even though i cant escape them even with the luddite knife.

it adds a little pepper to my graffiti t.v. dinner

nightly, daily, yearly clawing to be the winner

of what? like minded accolades?

arent these the same people who are allready on my page?

we including I should cater our ego message

legible with hate! for those who need our vantage

point

pinnacle

the top of the mountain

the views so good up here he shouts

so sure

so clear

he has no doubt

go ahead, come on, try and walk with us down here!

ive got some shoes for you to fill

come and walk with us down here!

fear you say, thats all youve got?!

we built the mountain and all youve bought.

with your red money, blood red soooo funny

world trade center comes down and YOUR nose is runny?

cant complain when your to blame, WHO'S name?

YOUR name, MY name its all the same.

consumers like WE,

buying, eating, fucking all we see

its us, sheer numbers, this world can not afford

too many human rats up on this god damn message board.................

 

-jerk182 (first timer. nice shit everyone quite inspiring)

 

 

I'm diggin that..........

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Here we go Gouged Out.........

I'm about to put your head out........

Got Chris Tucker yelling "You got knocked the fuck out!!"

What now?? You ain't never fading me.........

I'm about to roast you in this bitch about 200 degrees....

and you're kinda like 98 with your pretty boy antics.........

GET FRANTIC!!! 'Cause you're about to get stripped

down to your birthday suit and pistol whipped and punked out.........

Never down with my "click" but you STILL GOT jumped out.......

Kinda like Graves

in Seattle with OFA........

Why you draggin on your "S's"??? Punk faget you must be gay!!

"Basssssstard stop...........don't do me this way!!!!"

Stop lying to yourself and just come clean.....

I'm the KING in this bitch and you ain't nothing but my queen.......

See what I mean?? You could never really impress me...............

Go memorize the entire dictionary then try to stress me!!!

Even with an infinite vocab you don't wanna test me!!

Iller than Wesley when I snipe skimpy newjacks..........

I don't give a fuck if your whole crews black and cockdiesel........

Be ripping mics when I'm 80 yrs old ya fucking queer...........

Didn't ya hear????!!

I'm the type of cat that your foster mom warned you about!!! Remember her always yelling "Be careful Gouged Out!!!"?????

You're warned now!

I recommend you retire!

Step the fuck back nigga 'cause your "Ho card" is about to expire!!!!!

 

 

You get gaffled fucking around little boy!!!!

Boring Bastard "The Internet Kid Puncher"....................

Let's keep it going here!!!

 

 

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