Anthony from Brooklyn Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I miss LSD. I hate magazines that are all serious and shit (i.e. every magazine). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qawee Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 i think the majority of you are being assholes. i've glanced at alot more retarded shit on 12oz. Even if you dont appreciate what he's written, I dont see why everyone of you feel the need to tear it apart. nah b, i've never met anyone who wrote 4 paragraphs that were essentially advertisements for Audi, GMC, Christian Dior, Pharmaceutical companies, Chinese cigarettes, and shitty colorado in general and called it a novel Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alure Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PEOPLE! thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bokals.. Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 so many posts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bokals.. Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 *criticism Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qawee Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 [ATTACH]40567.vB[/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blood Feast Island Man Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I need a synopsis, 'cos I aint reading that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
serum Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PEOPLE! lay off the drugs, get out of the basement, put the mirror down, take a writing class. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GamblersGrin Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I need a synopsis, 'cos I aint reading that. "if it weren't for drugs, name brand clothes, and being forced to like girls in a male dominated world, i'd have nothing." that's the synopsis. because beyond those 3 things, there is no story. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boogie hands Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 i think the majority of you are being assholes. i've glanced at alot more retarded shit on 12oz. Even if you dont appreciate what he's written, I dont see why everyone of you feel the need to tear it apart. i just stated a fact....i was writing on that level in 8th grade. i wouldnt consider that tearing it apart. p.s. - and yes...the sperm bomb article was funny, as was the beatnuts article. p.p.s. - this is channel zero, not a comprehensive writing program. constructive criticism and positive thinking are not things that are in abundance here (thank god). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alure Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 get your boogie onnnn p.s. i know im not really making sense, i havent had coffee p.p.s. fine you all hate it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qawee Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 youmad? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony from Brooklyn Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 yo he mad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest R@ndomH3ro Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 Trail Mix is really on point right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alure Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 she aint mad at cha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Some1 Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 my 12 grain bread tastes like banana bread... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reuben Kinkaid Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 Meh, I enjoyed reading it, not for the quality of writing, more for the entertainment of an exaggerated fantasy world that's the complete opposite of my own. I'm glad PGW is back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weapon X Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I skimmed it and thought it was sorta funny. I love Chinese cigarettes. Chung Huis (sp) (pronounced Shung-Hwa). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bokals.. Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 <--- my post # states the year i was born... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest R@ndomH3ro Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 WOW.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theo Huxtable. Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 youmad? you maaaaddd! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bokals.. Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 new page... i know... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seeking Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 the only time shit like this is good, is when it's honest. this is not honest. dude wants so fucking badly to belong to something and be someone that he dick rides this psudo-glamerous junkie bullshit in the attempt to give himself an identity. as soon as you suck a dick to pay off your coke debt (julian), then i'll start to care. until then, it was my writing people wanted to read, not yours. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeweyVonGumpsteinAndTheWiz Posted December 13, 2006 Author Share Posted December 13, 2006 Meh, I enjoyed reading it, not for the quality of writing, more for the entertainment of an exaggerated fantasy world that's the complete opposite of my own. I'm glad PGW is back. thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bokals.. Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 i didn't even glance at it... just scrolled straight down.. like this.. . ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Some1 Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I am just suprised thaty you were following me around... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smart Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 Your search - donkey granola - did not match any documents. Suggestions: * Make sure all words are spelled correctly. * Try different keywords. * Try more general keywords. * Try fewer keywords. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony from Brooklyn Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 Some people were comparing this to Kerouac and Tucker Max, but this is more like a wannabe Nov York, except the Nov York book is real. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AyeBee Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I possibly would have liked it if he hadn't had the need to describe the brand of everything everytime he mentioned it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest R@ndomH3ro Posted December 13, 2006 Share Posted December 13, 2006 I am really tired of all this product placement in 12oz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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