Can i get some feedback?

looks good, is that an advertisement? I think the spacing could use a little wok, and also "word" doesnt stick out, try rocking a panel

has some potential, but looks about half done...

sharpen some edges and cut down on the bubbles, maybe change the font.... and try posting in a thread that already exists instead of starting a new one, especially with that hefty post count you got there....

and the word cliche comes to mind....

also, if the colors were more vibrant it would look a lot better