llxseanxll 0 Posted August 26, 2006 Can i get some feedback? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
james river 5 Posted August 26, 2006 looks good, is that an advertisement? I think the spacing could use a little wok, and also "word" doesnt stick out, try rocking a panel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
johnny ballbags 30 Posted August 26, 2006 has some potential, but looks about half done... sharpen some edges and cut down on the bubbles, maybe change the font.... and try posting in a thread that already exists instead of starting a new one, especially with that hefty post count you got there.... and the word cliche comes to mind.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dawood 147 Posted August 28, 2006 also, if the colors were more vibrant it would look a lot better Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
