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Originally posted by yukmouth@Mar 22 2006, 12:43 AM

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For what it's worth:

 

This is pretty good but I think it could be pushed a bit more. Compositionally speaking, it looks unfinished. The wall and the crack in the ground are good to sort of point to the focal point (the character) but then it kind of ends there and leaves the eye with a relatively blank right side. You might consider extending the wall (it looks awkward and little too convenient ending right at the character) and/or adding a cityscape or something on that right side. Color/technique wise it looks solid and very clean. I might add some darker values to the skin tones and the shirt, but that's just me. Lastly, I'd add a shadow underneath the character to "ground" it, if you will. Just my two cents.

 

Now ther one is really good. It's more of an illustrative piece, so the bottom left-heavy composition works really well. Nice work.

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Originally posted by FuzZy@Mar 22 2006, 04:52 PM

Yo 5dee, Im not trying to crack on you but are you using crayons???

 

Im sorry I just find that a bit funny :haha: :haha: :haha:

keep working on your sketches, you'll come around sooner or later

 

 

crayola markers!!!!! Thats all I had haha

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