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chuck taylor

<<<<<LISTEN TO MY FUCKIN MIXTAPE>>>>>

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cool, I'll definitely check and leave a comment when I get back to the cribbo..

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"knockin suckas out like joe thorton"

fuck joe thorton. he's a fuckin goof im glad im moving out of 'his' town.

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If a man from San Francisco knows who Joe Thornton is, things are looking better for the NHL.

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beats are ok lyrics are eh and delivery is really bad you just don't have the "sound" sorry to sound so bogus. earthquake is o.k. minus the intro

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couple things you need..

 

better beats

more energey

diferent style of rap/hip hop

 

 

its borring/overdone and bland.

keep trying though

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I mean it's alright but the production on the beats is not good at all. As for your delivery it's cool. I mean I've been listening to a lot of Mac Dre lately so I can see more of where you're coming from. But even still you should watch your flow sometimes it falls out of rhythm with the track. Record yourself with a metronome or practice more with instumentals, play it back and see how it works. More than anything you should be able to spit without any music behind you and people still be able to feel the rhythm, it's the most important part of music

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you should try to use fewer arrows and possibly less color... just go simple...complex is not always better..try block letter and add and subtract extensions to see what works mmk'..

 

 

got any accapellas? i'll trade ya for gummi worms

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