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Well, the tried and true method is learning straight letters really well. Based on the first few pages you posted I’d say you’re obviously putting in the effort on that end, but I would encourage you


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whats off about it?


i wasnt talking to you the post i replied to disapeared, lol. but ur on the right track leave color alone for now tho if you dont get it right it just makes the piece look shitty or shittier and it takes time away from you practicing letter structure

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I went for a simple new kind of style to me, and im pretty happy with the result.


Do y'all think i should keep practicing this throw, or is it whack, and i need to work on a new one.


Any crit on how to make better? Or how to improve 3D would be much appreciated.





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you talk as if u new something little toy i'll destroy you


I was just sayin that there's probably not a combination of four letters that hasn't been taken by some other writer. I don't see anything wrong with a guy writing OPES if you write OPUS. There's a whole letter difference. Now maybe if you were a famous writer, it would be different.And I ain't tryin' to talk crap, I'm was just tryin' to get a point across.

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my advice to you guys is dont listen to what people are telling you on here.


ive been reading some of the "crits" given. do you really want to take advice from someone who sucks just as bad as you?


How are we supposed to improve, i was pretty happy with my style but i was told otherwise, so dont no wether to keep practicin or just re-think a new one

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swedish erotica knows where its at. some of the writers on here should be looking at their own horrible shit rather then pretending to know whats wrong with someone elses.


Why would we need to look at our horrible stuff when we're all sat here improving on it anyway, we're just giving you tips... and if no-one really likes anything thats said about there stuff then why dont they all just fuck off and practise without posting there bollocks on here. People used to learn the hard way, solo writers that is.

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this is how you should start doing your 3d, dont worry about fancy schmancy stuff, this is also how you should be writing like your painting with a roller, get the feel for make clean consistent letters over and over and over, later ill explain how to make a letter have more style, you will though use a letter like this as a base.


all you do is draw lines the same width going left from all the points on the left side, you have to think of the letter as an actual object not a letter, its formed of bars, any left edge of the bar needs to have 3d to give it that popping effect.


then all you do is fill it in, sadly this took 30 seconds in photoshop, you probably cannot do better on paper.... this is how you should be writing, if i were to draw this same thing out it would look better and cleaner than 99% of the crap posted in here and it is just arial bold with 3d.





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