Sec_ebk Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 yeah i was wondering the same thing... great mind think alike.! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noobicorns Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 its a u. i thought the flattened bottom would make it more distinct, but i'll fix it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SapONE Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 Heres my first piece before the summer started: I kinda messed up on the last Z with the arrow..It just makes it look gay.. Here's what i'm working with now. Sorry for the sticker background.. Didn't get around to making some more wheatpaste: By the way they're both unfinished.. Crits..? Oh and i haven't done any graffiti over the summer, so my fingers aren't used to the usual stuff i do.. I've been only doing my throw-up.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rephugee Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 im from edinburgh scotland an write REPHS. been writin 4 a few yrs noo lookin 4 some constructive crit. cheerz. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rephugee Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 my comps shit an winnae link the pics so heres a link. sorry. http://www.fotolog.com/rephlection/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
screw-up Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 yo mang dis be my sketch...critz please...i write EPHE.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Ren Posted October 15, 2006 Share Posted October 15, 2006 i was just wondering does sector taken? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josefstrat@yahoo.com Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 Thanks for the feedback on that scetch, much appreciated. Plus it boosts my ego:D Ok, I know I prolly shouldn't be messin wif paint (although I don't think I'm that bad), and that this is paperchase, but I wanted to see what my throwie would look like on a wall, so I did this in my backyard. What y'all think? *Edit- I just noticed the sketch was gone, so here it is again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkone2dk Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 its lookn ok there home..keep practicingand get your can control down... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josefstrat@yahoo.com Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 The shed was wet. But thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kendoner Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 yo mang dis be my sketch...critz please...i write EPHE.. i like this...its different...props nigga...and HOME...dats a pretty dope throwup... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DewrNYC Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 killen time at work... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuklear kore Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 Lemme get some feedback on this. I'm tryin real hard to improve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkone2dk Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 aight yall now dont be to harsh ..this is my girls first time trying to draw something up ...yeah i know its ok but hey she wanted me to post it on here to get some feedback... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkone2dk Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 now this is my version of the same thing but more my style if you were to say... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poptart Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 killen time at work... this shit aint bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nerzhul Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tango 24 Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 Lemme get some feedback on this. I'm tryin real hard to improve. changing you word would be a start, stereotypical and played out to the extreme amongst the toy popultion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AOTPrep Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 aight yall now dont be to harsh ..this is my girls first time trying to draw something up ...yeah i know its ok but hey she wanted me to post it on here to get some feedback... bombing wit your girl is fresh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nuklear kore Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 changing you word would be a start, stereotypical and played out to the extreme amongst the toy popultion Crap, seriously? Any suggestions on what I should change it too? I like the letter K, E's are cool too I guess, S's are alright, and O's are alright too. I'm willing to try some different letters though.. Any suggestions? I can never think of good names :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 New throw. and handstyle. Critz please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 sorry so small, heres a bigger one http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/6898/1008466ge3.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pissdrunkwhat?! Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 youre trying to do graff like you write, capitals lower case etc, make everything a consistent size Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 okay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 my first attempt at a piece.... still not done yet, its whatever tho http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6223/picture1lw7.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
totoro Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 looks good so far except the little like bits coming of the ends of the m and stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
totoro Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 and home liking the painting throwys pretty dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 word word Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 heres the piece from earlier, but with one-point persective shading http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8595/picture1ge1.jpg critz on letter structure plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josefstrat@yahoo.com Posted October 16, 2006 Share Posted October 16, 2006 I like that you actually did a simple rather than try to do some crazy wildstyle burner. Your headed in the right direction, but you need to make your lines a little cleaner, and the actual letters a little straighter(M,N), and more consistent(O). But other than that, your gettin there, especially if that's your first piece. And I like your throwie, just make all the letters the same size. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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