rectone Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 Yo, sorry I haven't been on for a while. My internet's a bit screwy... In order: The simples around the sides and the bottom were just things I was fucking around with but yeah... The big one's the one I want most critz on... I was trying out a new A and I dunno if it came out good or bad... Looks OK sometimes when I look at it but other times it just looks like a messed up Y... yo dat shits hot ass hell...but have u eva heard of phaze2 or phase2...im not sure how it was spelled..but he is a legend....but yo grafff is hot ass hell...stay up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 just some throwies......da re is short fo rect Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadra666 Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 on the bottom one your E and C look the same. the handstyles are disgustingly bad, and you also need to study a color wheel.... but overall its not that bad, keep workin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 rect try some dead letters first before u go into throws...thats how i learned my shit...workin ur way up. and check ur pm too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro- Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 hey everyone, i just got into graff properly about 2.5 months ago. here's some of my new stuff. any crits appreciated :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ntfhdub01 Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Mage some of ur M's are straight but some look kinda bad. same goes for ur A. G and E u gotta work on more. especially ur G. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 did this with an airbrush, kinda difficult. critz would be apprieciated. peace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 better pic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 mybad my shit is fuckin up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spade561 Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Critssss. SNOPE: http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c216/scilz/5e2436e2.jpg Man, this is pretty dope. Everything on this one is straight. The colors came out nice too. I would say to work on that S. It's a little cliche, and parts of it are bigger than seems proportional. http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c216/scilz/27858f56.jpg The 'NEW YORK' part, is decent. Just practice it and you'll get it right. The character is a good start. Just practice. Nothing really bad to say about this. http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c216/scilz/b1026a0e.jpg Uhhh...no. It's not disgusting, but it's not something I would want to see on a wall. I don't know what to say without sounding mean. Basically, everything but the O is whack. No disrespect man. Good effort, it's just not there. Do a few straight letters with lines ALL the same width. It's a bitch to make it look good, but once you have that down, EVERYTHING will be soooo much easier. And when I say ALL lines, I mean ALL. I'll post an example in a minute. http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c216/scilz/146ab3cf.jpg I actually like this one. Study the color wheel. The colors are aight, but the green doesn't work. And purple and yellow don't go well together. The S is cliche, the N is cool, just....the lines are so thin it's hard to notice that it's there. I like the P though. Once again, just practice. You're on the right path. RECT: That yellow throwie is fresh man. All I really have to say is that the colors are...well, just not good choices. And the E and C look too much alike. But overall I like it a lot man. MAGE: Definitely heading in the right direction. To all three of you, just practice. You're making really good progress. Keeep it real, and stay up. EDIT: DRAKEDOG, no disrespect, but start over from scratch. Starting with straight letters. And the name is a little goofy. Trust me. You'll be glad you started over from nothing. Just get a LINED notebook, and fill the pages with hard work. Not lazy sketches. The lined notebooks help keep everything the same height, and if you flip it horizontally, it helps with the width of everything. No disrespect man. Keep it up though. Good effort. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 sum new shit.....staying simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 The T shouldn't be lower case, it nmakes it look a bit un organised. also rect, not having a go at you fella, but there's no need to post EVERY sketch you do up on here. wwell if not every, ceretainly alot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Yo this is sick boi, i like your styles, they're fresh. work on the G a bit, but apaprt frm that it's good yo.:cool: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Filoe Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 new piece of work tried a diffrent word 4 once Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scam Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Filoe Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 man wtf r they? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 something new. ill post some more stuff ive done up soon. critz please!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 .. that is all. critz in shit please. peace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Filoe Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 burner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 The T shouldn't be lower case' date=' it nmakes it look a bit un organised. also rect, not having a go at you fella, but there's no need to post EVERY sketch you do up on here. wwell if not every, ceretainly alot.[/quote'] i know i fucked up my t.....but da only reason i post up every thing is so my friend amsone can see how im geting better....we use to tag alll over together...but he moved Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onewaykids Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 tell us what you thingk i mean i realy need help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2006-1984 Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 Yeah, this thread will never be very helpfull... The best help you can get is practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted July 17, 2006 Author Share Posted July 17, 2006 Yeah, this thread will never be very helpfull... The best help you can get is practice. I met some people who say they have been painting for years and their shit is still garbage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 i know i fucked up my t.....but da only reason i post up every thing is so my friend amsone can see how im geting better....we use to tag alll over together...but he moved show him by email, or msn if you have it.;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 tell us what you thingk i mean i realy need help no disrespect but i think all ur letters are dispoportional and unbalanced. practice ur dead letters first and dont add any arrows or random parts stickin out. keep it clean and simple. dont think that arrows and random parts stickin out will make it look cooler. but just get ur dead letters down first. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 no disrespect but i think all ur letters are dispoportional and unbalanced. practice ur dead letters first and dont add any arrows or random parts stickin out. keep it clean and simple. dont think that arrows and random parts stickin out will make it look cooler. but just get ur dead letters down first. keep ur letters the same size too. dont have the C L and R bigger than the O's. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rectone Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 tell us what you thingk i mean i realy need help dat shit is hot...but u neen to fix da r.. i is kinda to big....besides dat.. u iight Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spade561 Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 My post unfortunately was the last one on the last page. SNOPE RECT MAGE and DRAKEDOG Your crits are on the last page. Keep up the good work everyone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted July 17, 2006 Share Posted July 17, 2006 critz? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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