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another one - i like using graph paper cuz it helps you make your letters the right sizes

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i'd also like feedback on my previous one

 

Dude you're using graph paper.

 

The lines are right on it.

 

Maybe try following the lines a little better.

 

::edit::

 

ADER

 

Looks good

 

But someone writes ADER and its pretty well known.

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'lo all. not posted in a while. anyway, i finally got me a blackbook. having something to put your shit in makes you work harder it seems...

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bbook2.jpg

 

^those two had little unfinished bits. i've done em now.

 

bbook4.jpg

 

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I don't really like the H the first E and the N.

 

maybe get rid of the swirl and move the 2 lines of the H a little more appart and get rid of the H to the E connection.

 

Then I would also get rid of the block on top of the first E. On the second one the block is ok.

 

I would also straiten the first part of the N

 

 

^^^^just my opinion

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that one looks cool but i think the letters should go all the way across the design

 

just my opinion:confused:

 

i thought it was goin to when i started..but this was a long time ago so i wasnt that great at that kind of stuff!

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an e i learned from future of graffiti

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I think the Future of Graffiti is a good instructional video but posting that 'E' that was copied

from the video is bad form. I'm not saying it's bad to do that as an exercise or practice...but keep

it to yourself or at least freak what you 'learned' in a new or different way. Otherwise you

just copied.

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Dude you're using graph paper.

 

The lines are right on it.

 

Maybe try following the lines a little better.

 

::edit::

 

ADER

 

Looks good

 

But someone writes ADER and its pretty well known.

 

 

yeah i know, but hes from new york, i'm from england ;)

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