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Originally posted by DestroyEverything@Apr 3 2006, 10:27 PM

critism please

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needs more hot pink..

 

and a little adjustment to the 3d in the I and E.. the vanishing point is skewed and split into two conlficting ones.

 

other than that try making the R more refind as a lower case.. i thought it was a T at first..

 

 

good stuff.. but lay off the paint pens.. if you must ..use gel markers to get an idea of layer properties

 

 

oh and there shouldnt be 3d in the D at all.. try a lower case D...unless its a P.... try movinng the loop placement of the first letter so you dont have overlapping... or tighten the loop of the D so its smaller

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This part was pretty fun. Went to the water tank. Basically hiked up a mountain. Wasnt prepared with good stuff but soon will be getting spray etc... Just practicing and getting used to that adreneline rush and stuff

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try taking your R and E away from each other so they dont run into each other and does your friend right read or is that you and you just have a wierd N some times? :haha: and there is like a big tooth kind of thing coming out of the e (not the part from the R) that looks mad wierd ya

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i like that yellow diet..maybe make the Is smaller...nice tho.

 

vare may not be able to do a throw but he can do nice other shit so who cares!

 

freakeenyc they ok..i would concentrate more on the letters atm than the colouring..or take ur time more cos it looks a lil sloppy. make the letters more basic..like thebottokm one with a less silly O.

 

bin out for a few months..first try again...probs shudnt hav tried nu shit after a break but meh... obv some of it dont flow..like that B dont fit wit the other letters but wateva..for a battle:Kabey, comments?

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crave try pushin the letters closer together on that piece and giv em a 3d..it all loks too spaced out. not bad at all tho

 

toxus, the overlappin letters dont really do it 4 me and the first letter is too small...ur gettin better slowly tho:)

 

rec, no idea wot that is, but i like it alot lol...! mayvbe try to make it more obvious whats goin on n where the letters r?

 

for a battle.. didnt wanna do an S so ima do sumtin holdin it again lol..cant do Ss.. lol so apart from that nethin u rekon i shud change b4 i ink and colour it? (soz if u cant see it v well) SPRING:

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This part was pretty fun. Went to the water tank. Basically hiked up a mountain. Wasnt prepared with good stuff but soon will be getting spray etc... Just practicing and getting used to that adreneline rush and stuff

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YO man... That shits wack... keep it simple...

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