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can anyone comment on the piece i did its posted on i think pg 151 its a link cuz i didnt/still dont kno how to get the pic up....come on pp u have time to comment on everyone elses but not time to click a link? itll pop up in a matter of seconds i PROMISE ITS NOT A VIRUS lol i just really want some feedback

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nice n straight forward but your 3d is off jans !

get werking on that outline over n over n over mate it will get better with your 3d !

best thing i can think of to do is draw the 3s outline no colour fill or anything then scan n print it off about 5 or 6 times n practice your 3d on them from each direction

 

bottom top left or right ! try it |

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Originally posted by HandPickedGod@Feb 15 2006, 06:12 PM

Some of my Pivot-Ender shit.

 

Ender (Not finished)

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Pivot

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Critique please and thanks. Or, may I graduate from this thread and roam to other places?

 

You should post them when they are finished. I would like to see what you do for coloring. I say you graduate.

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yo jans i looked at ur shit and i guess its alrite..work on ur letters more and try to balance out ur shit. ur J is straight but it could look better if the bottom part was a lil thicker and the A and S needs more work. N is okay i guess but it cuold use some work too. It would look better over all if u keep everyting straight and same style of the letters. ur A and S has a different look frmo the J and the N. also work on ur shadows. its too thin and ur also missin and have it on places ur not suppose to

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Originally posted by Guide+Feb 16 2006, 08:50 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Guide - Feb 16 2006, 08:50 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-zymogenesyst@Feb 16 2006, 03:43 PM

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any advice?

 

every one is going to tell yuo to stat simple which you shoduld and you need to steady your hand that green outline is mad sketchy up at the top

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i think ya hand wrightind needs something new

 

no affence but if ya gonna tagg that up on walls ppl are gonna think u are a proper toy

 

try useing something simple

 

simple can also look affective and good

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Damn… where to start?

 

@VareOne, I really need to learn from you. It really looks like you sketch a lot. I think that's how you really get good. Plus with those last ones you posted it kind show ppl how you formed your letters. Props.

 

@Politics&Bullshit, your shading is off the hook man. I would really like to see you color them because it would look sick, especially the character.

 

@freak, I really think you got something going… I know those were just sketches but cleanup your lines.

 

@C4BOOM, work on your letters just as much as your charcters. Good start though.

 

@CRUELone, shit looks tight to me. Keep’em coming.

 

Just did this one and I really like the arrows. I'm still not there yet though. :hatred:

 

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Originally posted by Mr.Rome+Feb 16 2006, 09:51 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Mr.Rome - Feb 16 2006, 09:51 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'>let me get some feedback plz

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Originally posted by some pittsburgh flavor@Feb 17 2006, 04:13 AM

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let me get some feedback plz

 

change your name

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well that sed it all! he a burner on yours defo!

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