Giant 128 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 top left of bottom two in the middle row best there. @whtboi202 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Limeliciouz 61 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 On 2/8/2020 at 7:40 PM, Giant said: Outlined the better ones damn uv got some solid style dude. bigup. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 12 minutes ago, Limeliciouz said: damn uv got some solid style dude. bigup. Thanks lime, I've improved but wouldn't go as far to say I got solid style lol but it is getting there slowly thanks dude Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 Yer...... don't think I'm ready for extensions still just yet 2 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Banok1 111 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 i like that one man Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 8 minutes ago, Banok1 said: i like that one man Thanks dude Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Joker 1,087 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 (edited) 17 hours ago, whtboi202 said: Messing around with my handstyle. Looking to improve mine so all criticism welcome I'll preface this feedback with this - I prefer what I would call a classic handstyle over all others, but I definitely enjoy all styles. Looking at what you've posted I would say that you should go with what you're most into, and it would seem that you're most into that one-line tag (best version is bottom right). And to be honest, it looks better than your classic-style tag (top left & bottom middle). When I saw it it immediately reminded me of the tag Atom does for WOW crew that he's in (see below, top - middle of pieces). It's not the same, just reminds me of it... it's unique. It's like he created an invisible upside down triangle and made the letters fit in the shape. I think learning a good, classic handstyle would be beneficial, but if you're not feeling it then you're never going to feel comfortable writing it, so go with what feels right. Do what comes naturally and over time that tag will evolve into something more crisp, more refined. I'll mess around with some options using that style and share later. Edited February 10, 2020 by Joker added photo 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 10, 2020 Share Posted February 10, 2020 Practice practice practice Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 11, 2020 Share Posted February 11, 2020 Feel like I'm flooding the forum. But trying to draw every night lately. im liking that bottom right P Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 11, 2020 Share Posted February 11, 2020 Connection e to n? Or separate think I preferred the separation but would need to move the n across a bit 2 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Joker 1,087 Posted February 12, 2020 Share Posted February 12, 2020 On 2/9/2020 at 7:54 PM, whtboi202 said: Messing around with my handstyle. Looking to improve mine so all criticism welcome Spent some time messing around with your letters. Don’t know if any of this helps you but figured I’d share. 2 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Ray40 394 Posted February 12, 2020 Share Posted February 12, 2020 Some sketches from school, I still don’t have my art supplies so it’s in pencil🙁 advice is accepted 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Joker 1,087 Posted February 12, 2020 Share Posted February 12, 2020 @Ray40- Believe me when I say those latest drawings are big improvement from even six months ago. Very cool. I'll be honest with you... I have no criticism on either of those. I would encourage you to keep going with those outlines and working on refining them. There's some different bar widths that could use some tightening up but overall these are looking good. I really like the second one on green paper. Nice hustle! 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Ray40 394 Posted February 13, 2020 Share Posted February 13, 2020 I am just wondering how many young people are in 12 is because I see what a beautiful thing it is and I want it to continue when the OGs pass on 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 13, 2020 Share Posted February 13, 2020 Had a go at extensions again. Don't think I completely failed but could deffo be better 1 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
whtboi202 6 Posted February 14, 2020 Share Posted February 14, 2020 @joker love seeing what you do in this community and really appreciate everything. I've decided I want to practice a classic tag first before developing a different style. Just starting out with some simple letter at the moment until I get the feeling for them. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Ray40 394 Posted February 14, 2020 Share Posted February 14, 2020 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 14, 2020 Share Posted February 14, 2020 Some quickies 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giant 128 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 Quite liking the look of this simple one needs sharpening but yer... Quote Link to post Share on other sites
billoboy2020 9 Posted February 17, 2020 Share Posted February 17, 2020 hey guys, how do u like these 2? strugglin alot with T Quote Link to post Share on other sites
billoboy2020 9 Posted February 17, 2020 Share Posted February 17, 2020 (edited) ah, i uploaded the wrong file. this is the right picture. dont know how to edit my post. Edited February 17, 2020 by billoboy2020 typo 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Ray40 394 Posted February 18, 2020 Share Posted February 18, 2020 Working on my lower case, please give advice 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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Joker 1,087 Posted February 19, 2020 Share Posted February 19, 2020 @billoboy2020- my only feedback is that you’re letters are getting too wet-noodle looking. You’re curving and bending them in ways that don’t flow naturally, and when you’re doing simple-style letters like those it’s important to keep them feeling clean, crisp. Honestly, your sketch is really close it just needed some refinements... 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Joker 1,087 Posted February 19, 2020 Share Posted February 19, 2020 @Ray40- the lowercase is looking good. Play around with letter size and placement a little bit as your lowercase R is a lot smaller than your other letters, or at least it feels smaller. 1 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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