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meh. take your time if your going to go all the way thru the effort of uploading a flick. do a nice fill with a clean outline so we can actually see what you got goin on and give you better critique.

 

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i dont like the t to tag and write so i changed it to the p, i started just yesterday so tips are welcome.

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Read this thread, until you've done that don't post any pictures again. Start to finish. And don't change your SN anymore. Nobody gives a fuck.

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That throw was porly executed. See what I did there?

But yeah, where's the negative spaces in all your letters? You put it in on the bottom of the R and sketched them for your other letters.

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Your throws aren't just going to get better until you understand what each letter is.

That is why you need to read this WHOLE FUCKING THREAD.

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Tried toning down the fancy bs some. What do you birds think?

 

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those some badass letters and the coloring kinda strong too

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[ATTACH]171303[/ATTACH]

 

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hell naw thats fresh as fuck i dont eno what else to say the letters look dope as fuck and the shading is impecable

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i wanna go to the chitown and skate and paint on some shit i mostly paint characters though i dont really do graffiti

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Another sketch I did at work, rockin' those kilometrico's and stabilo boss's lol. Any tips and crits?

 

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thats a pretty fresh piece cholo black outlineing and 70s hippie colouring tight ness

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What's up PUTS, I could tell by your S and U that it was you before I seen you spelled your name backwards hahah.

 

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R needs tidying up, as does your D.

 

Overall you need better balance/flow. As in your letters need to be around about the same size/width or to be reasonably sized based on composition (compare your R to your D and also your two L’s).

 

Keep doing dimples until you’re tidy and sharp.

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