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Thanks for the crits.....:) appreciate them. I really need to practice more and more.

But until then i will try to give some constructive crits.

 

Broali: Your letter are good, and i like the style. The only fact that i need to mention is that the K is not perfect. The K is composed fron 3 bars the second bar of your K is too small, and the first part off the peace is biger then the last 2 letters. Try to keep the same hight.

And for my N, it is smaller because it is need to be small :) if you know what i mean?

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Haha thanks I realised the SY Was bigger after I had coloured :( And u gave me a wake up call for my K's ahaha ima try keep it 3 bars now thanks and the n, I kinda meant it is better if you keep them same size but it is anyones opinion tho :P

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First sketch with my new markers. PLEASE GIVE SOME FEEDBACK. i tried to keep my bars consistent and have the same height throughout. i got a little tight on space near the end so ill just move into the centre of the page next time

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how do people that only have 1 post already have a bunch of prop bars?

 

There are a few of us that prop new people just for the hell of it.

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Alot of people on here would prosper from simplicity.

letter development before backgrounds, characters, textures, fills, highlights, third dimensions, shadows, etc..

And @ tralertrash, not sure what your shooting for graff wise, but dope cursive font in top right corner .

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Did this one a couple of weeks ago. Didn't have any markers so its just black and white atm. Crits maybe? idk, thought id post it, nothing better to do. tkx 12160072583

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Saw some MSK member do this and wanted to give it a try, kind of a melting away in the wind feel.

 

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Zomb, those are pretty good. The M in the first pic could use some work. Maybe find a way to connect the sides, or make the separation look cleaner. The MARY, third to last, and last one are great, though.

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Word, I appreciate the feedback.

 

Been experimenting with characters also lately, and got a fat new handfull of sharpies. My old shit was going dry.

 

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This thread seems pretty gay and dead now, when I first signed up this thread was alive. Lots of toys posting, lots of vets throwing knowledge. What happened?

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