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the first one you posted is terrible, stop trying to link your letters up until you're ready to do it.

 

the simples are meh, your U looks like a V

 

 

just keep at it.

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the first one you posted is terrible, stop trying to link your letters up until you're ready to do it.

 

the simples are meh, your U looks like a V

 

 

just keep at it.

yeah i wasnt happy with the first one i just wanted to show where i started from haha and i agree both the u and the g need a lot of work.. i dropped the completely straight letter style the other day and started fuxin with some curved letters so well see how that goes. thanks man

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Kobar- I like it, looks good

L(v or u)ng - keep it simple,

Baze- bottom bar of the E is a bit off/too thick and long,. rest is nice

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The best advice to everyone is solid simple letters, learn that structure.

 

Lung - stop linking those letters together, also the way you weight the bars of your letters throws off my eye and stops any flow

 

Blondi - stop trying to run before you can walk. Look at writers like Kuma, rocks dope as fuck simples that is what you wanna aim for.

 

Torch, I like the Giraffe but the kick inwards on the end of the R just seems clunky, your simpler ones are better, the silver Torch with the connections needs some more consistency to the letters the C is really small

 

The Whut - lose some of those extensions they dont work

 

Ninja - I actually like that, best thing on this page

 

Baze - good solid simple man, that BA looks nice

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hey I'm new here an havent ever posted. have been havin problems with the account and am just trying to see if this reply will even work...

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haha idk why that says I registered in 06. I registered in 2012 and had problems with my account so I always got on here as a guest just to look at flicks. but it seems to be okay now so ima start postin up some stuff

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well yea.. Since august of 2012 i caught the bug... bad.... i dont know any writers personally in my city and have a friend who writes but lives thousands of miles away. i would really appreciate any crits i can get... i have no idea what im doing.

 

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