Dcor8 Posted June 13, 2012 Share Posted June 13, 2012 Eido, those are some crisp lines... I personally like the 1st pink tag, dont like when it gets too crazy.. keep messing around though until you find a style you really feel.. on another note, that solo M is sickk, like that a lot.. keep at it mayne DIC3, like torch said, bring it back to the basics man you got to just concentrate on keeping your lines consistent and straight before you should even think about coloring/extensions.. like people told me, gotta master the basics with blockbusters and simples before you can move on to the next level.. its like trying to bake a cake without the batter... colors, i think those 2 NAED ones came out the best, you kept it simple and gave it some flow with the curvy structure ill have something up in next few days Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DIC3 Posted June 14, 2012 Share Posted June 14, 2012 Went simpler, and went back to the block technique. Thanks for the advice guys, Still looks pretty bad =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted June 14, 2012 Share Posted June 14, 2012 DIC3 Simple letters means keyboard letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted June 14, 2012 Share Posted June 14, 2012 agreed. dic3 just copy your keyboard letters until all your bars are straight and same size. Don't worry about adding style right now dude... it'll come once you write those simples again and again and again and well you get the point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dstroyerz Posted June 15, 2012 Share Posted June 15, 2012 tips? opinions? I'm trying this fill pattern for the first time and I got the shield arrows and effects from seeing an Arab blackbook page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted June 15, 2012 Share Posted June 15, 2012 been away for a while since having to move from london to georgia, first sketch from GA yea its rough but i gotta get back into things lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoh Posted June 15, 2012 Share Posted June 15, 2012 iv been doing graff for about 4 years now but still cant get the hang of more complicated peices eg wildstyles and heaps crazy shit that i see everywhere am i just a slow learner or does it take a while to get that shit down like even more than 4 years? i can get the base for a wildstyle or complex peice like i can get the letters down i just cant seem to get the random arrows and extensions to flow my extensions and arrows always look like shit where i put them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted June 15, 2012 Share Posted June 15, 2012 just practice every day bro. eventually shit will fall into place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted June 15, 2012 Share Posted June 15, 2012 all the shit i did today haha. going to bed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoh Posted June 16, 2012 Share Posted June 16, 2012 that shit isn't to bad ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DIC3 Posted June 16, 2012 Share Posted June 16, 2012 I got my scanner working again, so here's my blockbuster sketch from last week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted June 16, 2012 Share Posted June 16, 2012 So hear is something..... Crits please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dcor8 Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 @romero, I like the style of that nove, its got nice flow to it.. @torch, I like how that 'Dios' piece came out the best... its got a nice style, nice fill and the 3d shading bars look on point.. id work around that style some more.. In the "Future" piece, your lines get reallllllly shaky and it came out inconsistent, the 1st 'U' is completely cramped and looks completely out of place.. work to try and make all your letters a consistent size throughout the entire word and it will really improve the outcome.. The 3d shading lines in that piece are inconsistent as well.. you want to try and stay tight and clean with those - keep them all going the same direction.. rushing small details like 3D shading can really ruin a piece.. As for the other stuff, im not really sure whats going on.. but keep practicing. Focus on staying consistent throughout your work.. you dont want to do 80% of a piece and get lazy and sloppy on shading and details, it can ruin the work .. something ive learned from experience... when I start to get lazy or want to just finish, that means its time to put down the pen and come back to it tomorrow with a clear head and new focus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dcor8 Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 @dstroyerz, before you start shooting for arrows and extensions, focus on simple letter structure, the width of some of you letter extensions and arrows is inconsistent and makes the structure look weak and sloppy.. the fill should add to the cpmposition of the piece as well, those lines make it look cluttered and confusion.. try a solid color or a color fade for the fill before you get all crazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 callin it done, not happy with bits of it so we will try again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 The color choice and subtle page flip idea is good, but what does it say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dcor8 Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 ^^Agreed, I was wondering the same.. not bad structure and composition but I cant make out what it says by any means Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 boom there seems to be too much goin on.. too many various widths and doo dadders.. im guessin you have been slackin on sketchin (me too ha) id start simple again and work my way to more add ons and such... does it say toast or toyst or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 lol had a few months off because i moved from the uk to georgia, hittin the books again. says twyst btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 Twist with your style, I seriously think you would benefit a lot from showing your work and doing the solid bars to keep consist. here is an example I did for someone else but it applies here as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faint Footsteps Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 Just go paint, fuck everyone else, and eventually it'll form together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trife408 Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 dope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 My t-ups badly need work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 tried something a bit different with pics as i went kinda. sorry no scanner here yet so phone pics are the best i have outline sketch.. added 3d.. colored 3d added a bit different color scheme.. outline, highlights and shading eh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
klobersaurus Posted June 24, 2012 Share Posted June 24, 2012 I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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