n30n b0n35 16 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 bump for noone feedback? ^^ Quote Link to post Share on other sites
n30n b0n35 16 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 ^^^ pretty consistent. i would say be careful with ure serifs and joins tho, the bottom of this is a little messy imo. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
KWG 14 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 Didn't know where to post this. A quick digi piece I did for solt. [/img] 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
MaltLiquorJunior 11 Posted May 31, 2011 Share Posted May 31, 2011 ^ thats pretty cool... Quote Link to post Share on other sites
redeyedanimal 234 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 ^cosigned. the extension on the T to the left could be shortened and have that arrow part come off of the top of the S. Looks in little cluttered in spots because of that extension. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Spawn-Of-Sham 11 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 feedback? ^^ For the coin, or basically the white lines in the 3d keep practicing that. It doesn't look as good as it could. And just sketch that over and over. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Big Teetas 49 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 I dont like it, needs more simples. its actually hard to read. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
redeyedanimal 234 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 ^what about the simple inside the piece? When i noticed that simple and could read the bigger piece, i liked it better as a whole, but it does seem cluttered in some spots due to the extensions. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
n30n b0n35 16 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 Exchange with JITSU. How u feelin? Quote Link to post Share on other sites
n30n b0n35 16 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 A quick pencil piece i think came out nice. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-Zen 7 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 havent done anything since november, finally got another black book, pencil and a sharpie and knocked this piece of shit out. o ya this too. 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Doodle 112 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 zen lookin dope, keep doing those! yokai that looks nice but the K's leg is too thick Quote Link to post Share on other sites
ninja x status 6 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 Nice neon! Thanks. I'm working on yours now. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Sik-TwentyFo 8 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 one for Rakse, probably do some more later quickie in class Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Sik-TwentyFo 8 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 i really hate that "e" Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Sik-TwentyFo 8 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 my friend was goin through names, he could write nd this one didnt make the cut, i might write it tho i fucked the C up bad Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Big Teetas 49 Posted June 1, 2011 Share Posted June 1, 2011 ^what about the simple inside the piece? When i noticed that simple and could read the bigger piece, i liked it better as a whole, but it does seem cluttered in some spots due to the extensions. Yeah but the structure is still on the bad side, he has the right idea, i just not feeling his letters. I mean the top of the S dipping down like that over the middle bar, bad idea imo, i wouldnt do that. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Sik-TwentyFo 8 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 oh shit i didnt mean to post that, nd its not letting me edit strangely Quote Link to post Share on other sites
EliAlibi 24 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 If you were using bars properly the E wouldn't look so retarded. leave off the stupid shit at the top of the artic. look at graffiti, look at typography, practice, and quit posting. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Giml75 2 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 my rabid entry. Crits welcome Quote Link to post Share on other sites
KADE_ONE 40 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 practice straigth letters first sir Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Spawn-Of-Sham 11 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 zen lookin dope, keep doing those! yokai that looks nice but the K's leg is too thick Yeah I agree. That shit explodes with size. Its a nice shape though And giml no diss but don't enter that. It wasn't executed to its full potential in my opinion. I see that you tried something new and I think that's dope but draw it over and over until it looks better. Could be worse though. Add more stars and dots to the fill too Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Anti-Zen 7 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 my rabid entry. Crits welcome do simples first, like the letters on your keyboard. and dont worry about color yet in my opinion just focus on your structure. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
skeetfunk 8 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 mad rough sketch during break gotta tweak some ish but i like it Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Darkeist 25 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 mosk i like where youre going with that, maybe use a pencil and use like..actual bars..just draw lightly and erase kind of. it needs alot of practice though but it has potentional Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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