redeyedanimal Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 there is no structure at all in that sketch. it's a bunch of noodle letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Couple Of Quick Sketches. Crits Needed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 use bars, do simples, read the past 5-10 pages of this thread for general advice. What you are doing now is very unappealing. in the second pic, to the right of your s's, do that, but use bars to build letters. Just read up and get back at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 mos, don't attempt any 3D right now. and sketch in pencil. n8, when i'm trying to do nice O's on paper, I sketch out a box and cut rounded corners inside the box. It's easier to eyeball. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Thx 4 The Info Red Eye. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Need A New Tag. Want to Start Ova From The Beggining. Any Suggestions From AnyBody.Letters I Hate: YQRVXKGFW and B Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mos-One Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 I'm Going to Write Sole But if Anybody Finds sumone very known or from the new york area writing it Tell Me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 I think you should do your own research, and not rely on other people to tell you. Its all a part of writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 way better vossy!! id widen the bottom y extention bar, and round those points on the s's and y (or make points on the v maybe o)... ..clean up your lines a little, make them a little more consistant.. but thats lookin way better.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solvents Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 fresh stuff vossy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 yes vossy! That is why you pay attention to consistent bar widths! The bottoms of the S's and the Y need a little work, but that is 100 times better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Man, you guys love the stuff I hate... Well hate is a strong word, but don't like as much... Honestly, I really only did that second one as a kind of throw away. But so far, its the only one I've actually painted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Mos, there was a big guy from chicago that wrote sole/soler who got killed this year. wouldn't write that one just yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakse Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 if you want to write properly dont try getting all your advice online do your own research and that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatdamnsover Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 theres about a million sole's get a new name protip:anything like blade or skeme or dash or any cool sounding names like that are usually all taken by decent writers and millions of toys, make your name longer or more obscure names like neckface, earsnot, craola, optimist... original shit like that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 the top pic is the bottom one wit a face fill. i did this 2yrs ago and is still one of my faves in my book. cant wait till i wanna paint it one day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 bump that jeg face piece^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vapid Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Thinking of changin names. DC is hard to make flow for me. Crit. plz I know its not the best but for those who dont under stand bars thats it. basic shit Added the outline and erased what isnt needed Some other shit i was trying out Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 2nd pic, even on the middle of the A to fit the rest, and do it over and over and over and over and over again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vapid Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 yeah i noticed they A was fucked up when i had already outlined it. I think the rest of the letters are somewhat solid. Anyway ya im going to keep practicing of course Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 @ vapid - agreed, the rest of the letters are much better than expected in this thread. post up one with some changes, keep at it man. that crim throw is dope. have you settled on a 4 letter name yet? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 for my boy yoeks one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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