Anti-Zen Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 alright, thanks for the advice man, any crits for the piece? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 piece is pretty much on point for simples, a few inconsistencies but that comes with time. Colours could use some work but that also comes with time. Jakd, you should be doing what zen is doing. If you cant bust a simple block letter piece cleanly then you arent ready to experiment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawdog502 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 gotcha, thanks dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FADR1 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 Go easy on me, it was my first attempt at wildstyle. And yes, I know a lot of it is inconsistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 ITS HORRIBLE AND YOU SHOULD QUIT NOW/KILL YOURSELF. where the fuck are all these toys coming from lately???? i mean really yo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 HA! i never heard a PMS joke before! it's funny because I'm a dude. I get it. HEY FUCKER. wheres my sketch you owe me? incase you forgot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 whatchu talkin' about? you saw this one, i'm pretty sure. http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6055/6290049444_9fa477ebe0.jpg' alt='6290049444_9fa477ebe0.jpg'> romero exchange by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] it was awhile ago, so i'd be down for another if you are. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted March 23, 2012 Share Posted March 23, 2012 whew, tough act to follow^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 crits? i dk how to smooth out my colors... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 zen since ur using a black outline, i'd use lighter colors for the fill. just for contrasts sake. and um yea overall its good, there is definitely room for perfection..ie the overall width of the E is less then the other letters..if u can rock these out quickly and perfectly you should definitely try to work on differnt other fonts or just your own style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 whatchu talkin' about? you saw this one, i'm pretty sure. http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6055/6290049444_9fa477ebe0.jpg' alt='6290049444_9fa477ebe0.jpg'> romero exchange by EdictOner, on Flickr[/img] it was awhile ago, so i'd be down for another if you are. i don't remember this hahahah. and yeah, i'd be down but idk when i'll be able to post anything. my computer has a virus and it makes it impossible for me to do anything. i got one for bowzer and someone else that i need to post that have just been sitting around my apartment collecting dust. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 sorta like bart simpson Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 not bad bro. the JI part is good. the only thing i would change about those two is the 3 bubbles above the I. as for the rest, the T is too slanted in one direction and looks off balanced, as does the S. i think you should have made the follow the same slant as the J and I. it doesn't have to be perfect, but in the same basic direction and level of slant as the two first letters. and thicken up the top bar of the T. i can see what you were trying to do, mirror the J AND U so that they are going in opposite directions. juxtapoz? i think thats the word i want to use. in that case, the T doesn't need to be bent to such a degree because its in the middle and acts as a mid point, it shouldn't lean to either side, because that makes the piece look off balanced. idk if that makes any sense, all in all im liking your overall style. keep it goin bro. props to ZEN as well, pretty solid straight. would look good as a roller or something. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abovethefogg Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Crits on anything? http://www.flickr.com/photos/69826838@N02/6866507066/in/photostream Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abovethefogg Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Idk how to delete posts...so ignore the one above. Crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 solid stuff colors, keep at that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinx2162k Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Say what you think... I'll be posting more in here tonight! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Baze, keep drawing, dont post everything you do. Your letters are all different thicknesses and sizes, make ure bars consistent. Show that you can do a solid simple before you try adding any funk to the letters. that goes for everyone, take your time and put in the hours, your gonna need at least a year before your stuff even resembles graffiti. That is unless you bite the shit out of someone elses work... Draw me up and post a simple because I added no funk whatsoever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/tramp.jpg[/img]"] http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/riino.jpg[/img]"] dont talk shit or ill be forced to start... http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/splittindomes.jpg[/img]"] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Whats the need for that shit? Either give crits, post a pic or say nothing. HEY! fuck you. im glad they finally decided to put you in charge of this thread homie. i like how you told me to "either give crits, post a pic or say nothing" and youre in here tryin to correct me and shit. dude shut up or post a pic or crits or somethin. lyke oh em gee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 HAHAHAHAHA i didn't realize this was the dude talkin shit in here til just now HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA not talkin shit. im talkin the truth bro. nothin more nothin less. dont get mad at me ass hole Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Anti-Zen Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 Say what you think... I'll be posting more in here tonight! im not sure, but it seems like you're bars seem shakey and the width is too off...i'd so go back to simples. but you're showing creativety which is good mang. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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