brothhalynch Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 [/img] [/img] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 ^ you've been told to go simpler and you see results so i will just tell you that the pieces look like assbutt with no structure/lacking 3d/etc... and the characters are just basically-drawn, recycled images from shows, etc.... so, practice it like this first VAER<---- or its all just gonna be doo-doo.... ..ps, quit reposting this shit... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReackOne Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 jea Liking that old skool fill on that MTD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 Spin 183( The One From Style Wars) Wrote This For Me.. I Met Him While I Was Doing Laundry.. Kknda Star Struck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sik-TwentyFo Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 He Also Gave Me The Character and a 20 dollar discount on a Custom Hat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 tell me what yall think. also mosk!!hadnt seen him post for a bit then he comes in here, nice improvement buddy! also how do you do the old school fill on the mtd like that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 anyone want to exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 3, 2011 Share Posted May 3, 2011 Ye MOSK came back hard. Props. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaltLiquorJunior Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 get prismas and fuck around haha i wanted to fade it more but got lazy and uh thanks for props guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 anyone want to exchange? yeah what do you write again? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 yeeee mosk..that mtd came out mad dopee.! u shud fill in the mosk maybe unless u wanted it whiet? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cNeeK Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 What's up y'all cNeeK here.. New here, but not new to the scene. Although, it has been awhile since I've ink'd up some paper/walls. Trying to get back into it. Here's a quick something I pieced up today (I've had better days. lol). CnC see you guys around the forumz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 ^^^ i would say go simpler, lacks structure. crits? i need to work the O and the A more. Was gonna go arrows but left them faint, just pondering lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noone57 Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 something quick during class.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 that yokai is a keeper! i like that style alot man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 ^^^ 3D is on point. Watch where ure letters overlap, i tend to keep it to a minimum so random gaps between letters dont get confused as other letters, give em space to breath. Easy on the extensions too, that whole bottom left area of ure N is busted. PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cNeeK Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 quickie before leaving work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noone57 Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 thanks for the feedback n30n! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Men$ch Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 Sup, My name is Mens (hey Mens) I'm new here. I really want to get better at this. Would appreciatie criticism. Thnx!:D Mens' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fonzz Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 Yo im new to writing been on 12 oz for awhile but was kinda waiting to post because i didnt want to get ripped apart but i need crits like bad so should i just start posting a couple sketches? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Men$ch Posted May 4, 2011 Share Posted May 4, 2011 How else can you get citis? Just post it man and don't be shy. I just did (see above) and I'm not really good eather. They will be gentle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cNeeK Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 ya bro, whether you get bashed on or not, criticism is criticism. Just take it in and keep on going. you'll be alright xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 also as a heads up..most of the same advice given applies to most other ppl...so if u read thru a few page and look at the advice given to others..it could potentially help you as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 mens, the last one has the most potential, the rest it is apparent that you are trying things that you don't technically understand. Letter structure is very important to understand, and everyone's understanding of structure can be different, and still correct. Look back on this thread a bit, check out the crits given to others, especially the graphed out examples that Freak did for Pie, and try to get insight into structure and using bars to build letters. Also, this is a great example of using bars to build letters, and keeping it simple but funky and stylish: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fonzz Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 Almost all of them are from school so some of them got shit on them lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 fail. Change your settings to public, we can't see em. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fonzz Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 shit. ok done lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 read this thread, apply the crits for others to your own work. Simple, block letters built with bars, consistent width, etc. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fonzz Posted May 5, 2011 Share Posted May 5, 2011 alright , thank man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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