Adernaline Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 just a cack outline i did in a lecture today feedback appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adernaline Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 simple or more complicated?? :confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FRESH_FRANK Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 Originally posted by Adernaline@Sep 21 2005, 01:36 PM simple or more complicated?? :confused: Quoted post IT WOULD LOOK BETTER WITH A BIG BLACK LINE THROUGH IT. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adernaline Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 i dont have a big black pen, will purple do?;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
discode Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 Here is a word that someone wanted me to do for them. Tell me what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheArchitect Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 not bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 i kinda like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 Originally posted by engli@Sep 16 2005, 12:45 PM ...can i get some feed bak please Quoted post i kinda like it except for the fact that your letters sizes r so offset...and it doesnt look intentional either...it just gradually gets igger and the last letter is huge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gaze_juan Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 Originally posted by discode@Sep 21 2005, 04:48 AM Here is a word that someone wanted me to do for them. Tell me what you think. Quoted post wolf?? not bad.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
discode Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 thanks for the feedback everyone. I know that the word is weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tope24 Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/3554/imgp07445ef.jpg http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/5971/imgp07458ho.jpg http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/4919/imgp07468mx.jpg n e feedback appreciated, i no i screwed the o up on the top one with that thing on the side but oh well...I think maybe i should carry on with the second one and dump the other 2 for now... But we'll see Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 ur c/p the wrong address......c/p thr img address........ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 but as for feedback...keep workin on the second one....thats the only descednt one.....throw the others away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tope24 Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 Originally posted by CRUELone@Sep 22 2005, 06:50 PM but as for feedback...keep workin on the second one....thats the only descednt one.....throw the others away Quoted post I will thx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anew Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 some feedback please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toxus Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 apart from the 3d is bad how can impvove? oh and... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adernaline Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 my latest attempt at trying to paint something. emphasis on trying. theres actually a crap fade in the 3d, but its not very clear. yea the bottom of the a's fucked! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 i like the D and R...not so much the A and E tho..but its still painted good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tope24 Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 ok heres some new sketches i did today, give me your opinions... i think i hav improved since my last post on this thread... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theGOON Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 i just glanced at a few of the pages. couple points of advice i was given, and some of my own: fills: for now while your form is as weak as it is, keep it extremely simple, 1 or 2 colors. by throwing in waves and everything you're just "aggravating" the form that you have. one solid color allows you to focus on the form (which is, i feel, the most vital part of graf--more than fills, color schemes, etc). good form, even w/ a bad fill can be respected. wack form and wack fills can only be dissed. form: i think everyone who gets into graf starts with dreams of being the next saber (or respective era-great), so they try to do a lot w/ forms, pushing what the letter is. that comes in time. for now, KEEP IT SIMPLE. i'm saying take an arial font and use it. study it. examine every point of the letter. SANS SERIF. NO FLARE. just the absolute necessary parts that make the letter. play w/ thickness of the lines--outline as well. the more you make, the better you will understand where the strengths of each letter is. my early books i dedicated pages to each letter of the alphabet. (more about this on my biting point) 3d--keep it simple for now. focus on form... biting/studying--yeah yeah, everybody thinks they're too good to bite. good. keep that attitude, but you've been doing this for 3 months and you plan on mastering this art w/o emulating the masters? be real about it, be honest. admit when you're doing it, but do it! find a piece you really like, and copy it exactly (don't trace) but do your best to transfer all the lines onto your page. "feel" each curve, feel each piece of flare as it comes from the base form. a lot of this comes in time, but its okay, you'll develop style in a year or two, for now you don't have it, so use somebody else's. find exercises which allow you to understand positive flowing forms. *i'm sure somebody's gonna be pissed about this comment... suck it. just keep trying to understand what is happening on your piece. best advice--ALWAYS DRAW. don't stop. do it whenever you can. just doodle. draw waves and curves and circles. work w/ perspective points. discover what is appealing to the eye. study other art forms--modern art offers a lot of curve and angle specific ideas. tear through a black book in a month, come back to that book in 6 months and redo the sketches--see if you can accomplish what you were trying to create now w/ new skills. i think i'm just rambling at this point, but i think there is some nuggets of knowledge in this rant. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gongon Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 beginner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gongon Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
12OzOfGod Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 Originally posted by Adernaline@Sep 23 2005, 10:55 AM my latest attempt at trying to paint something. emphasis on trying. theres actually a crap fade in the 3d, but its not very clear. yea the bottom of the a's fucked! Quoted post That fill is pretty tight. The R and D are pretty ill, but the other two need work. My advice is to not make the bottom of your A so long. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRUELone Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 Originally posted by gongon@Sep 23 2005, 06:23 PM beginner Quoted post stay away from graffiti creator......simples son Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEAZ Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 enko Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEAZ Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 giv feedbak plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tope24 Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tope24 Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 theGOON speaks sense, Im definatly gonna dedicate a page or 2 to each letter of the alphabet and see what happens :king: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
toxus Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 help me out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tope24 Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 ur 3d has got better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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