Darkeist Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 yea i kinda saw that too but fuck it. and thank you sir Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 I like that last one too, bar the swirl and that leg of the R, i can see what you were going for, but make the leg like the h and A in my opinion. also see how your D and R have those kicks out the top left, do the same to the H or just drop it all together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snotballs Posted March 11, 2011 Share Posted March 11, 2011 ya nice sketch dahr, id change up the top of your A though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UmYawhatuneed Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 http://img864.imageshack.us/img864/2158/picture061.jpg' alt='picture061.jpg'> Uploaded with ImageShack.us[/img] Looking for criticism, thanks, Just a sketch what do you think about the letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 keyboard simples. do them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 style has potential..keep practicing that i say..but also do simples too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeadingEdge Posted March 12, 2011 Share Posted March 12, 2011 keep it more simple, those extensions shouldnt be there. good color usage though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CeroUno Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 Just a heads up, nobody is gonna jump straight into the glamor of it all. You just gotta do letters and be honest with yourself on how it looks, never settle. Repetition is key. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smackdownslayer44 Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 agreed^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fuck Dem 22's Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 I'm still messing with it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devils_Advocate Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 'Sup guys, Im new here, and new to graffing in general. check it, some piece i did a couple weeks ago just flicked it today. it says CES if you cant see it. I just started writing like a year ago so im not a king yet but im getting there, though it's safe to say that i burn most of the dudes in my crew LOL. my boy kept telling me it needs more arrows and i was like "nah dawg, 2 is my limit" because any more than that and it comes out lookin toy as fuck. i was also debating on whether or not to add a cloud around it but i thought that would be to cliche so i went with stars instead.Any crits? oh and i know your not supposed to rock a crown but i did anyways, not that im some super known graffer or anything but i just feel like we are all kings on the inside ya dig? -CES,stay up. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 ^is that a joke? That has to be a joke. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devils_Advocate Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 Why do you say that? I know im not good but i didnt think i was that bad haha. any crits? Also i dont understand why you have that hippy picture up, i dont even like rock music. EDIT: nevermind,thats jesus,haha. my bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 i seriously don't even know where to start... CES is a taken name, look him up. Do your research. Stick to simpler letters for now, your consistency is lacking. don't use arrows, especially at first. They will come with time when you understand structure. The extensions and addons aren't well executed, same idea as arrows, they will come later. Start with the basics, use bars to build letters and get standard letters down first. I wasn't intending to be a dick, apologies for being one. that being your first post, and the terminology used led me to believe it was a more experienced writer making jokes... and ESPECIALLY that it says CES. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 LOL "i don't even like rock music" hahahaaa listen to redeyed and try and take more time with your sketches it looks really rushed especially the colouring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devils_Advocate Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 i seriously don't even know where to start... CES is a taken name, look him up. Do your research. Stick to simpler letters for now, your consistency is lacking. don't use arrows, especially at first. They will come with time when you understand structure. The extensions and addons aren't well executed, same idea as arrows, they will come later. Start with the basics, use bars to build letters and get standard letters down first. I wasn't intending to be a dick, apologies for being one. that being your first post, and the terminology used led me to believe it was a more experienced writer making jokes... and ESPECIALLY that it says CES. cool,thanks for the info...what do you mean by bars? i cant think of many letters that are bars except for like i's and l's and shit...i dont think i can pull that off with my name.. it's all good,i will just change my name to GES then.its pretty similar and i dont think thats taken..except for gez i saw on youtube,do you think he would be mad if i took his name? ive seen what he can do to tarps i would hate to have beef with that dude...his throwies look pretty legit. im sorry for the ces thing though,its my initials thats why i picked it..i dont want to look dumb or anything.lol. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 13, 2011 Share Posted March 13, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitchesbrewske Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 u got trolled my trigga Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 true. It was suspected after the first post, but you never know how dumb some people are. Benefit of the doubt i guess.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heyzues Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devils_Advocate Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 im not a troll trust.but i would like to thank you, i took your advice to heart and in turn made some strides..not a huge improvement or nothing but it is definitely appreciated.. thank your redeye.if only my tag would improve :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 i'll play along, though i'm still convinced this is all a joke. don't write ges either... http://www.12ozprophet.com/forum/showthread.php?t=93780&page=82 doo reesurch befoer chewsing a naem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devils_Advocate Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 damn..i had no idea,that ges dude is super dope. ZES isnt taken is it? oh well,i guess i'll go with that then.dont want to step on any toes lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 chances are, none of these dude's will ever know who you are, so it doesn't really matter that much. And if you actually stick with graffiti long enough you will learn what not to write. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 clearly trolling..no way that ges and that ces u posted are done by the same person. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 it's clearly a tarp1!!1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devils_Advocate Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 why cant you accept the fact that im just a fast progresser? is it so hard to believe i went from ashy to classy so fastly? please refrain from playahatin my good sir.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 massgraff has no life, my guess. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 SATAN SPAWN! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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