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[redeyedanimal]

where's the L? Dope stuff though.

[DjKeNNyKiLoz]

where's the L? Dope stuff though.

 

Nice catch, I for got it. I do another one today. haha thanks.

[Sevage]

Alright Phony, I like your one simple, so here is my advice on how to evolve it.

First P I broke down your letter structure, it is what you currently have.

Understanding how the blocks make your P is very important, I suggest doing all of your sketches like this, than erase the inside lines after. Second P shows how just extending some of the blocks a little bit adds some style. Third P adds a bend to one of the bricks. Fourth P shows changing the width of 2 of the bricks at a gradual pace.

 

I would recommend doing a evolution of each letter of your name separately, showing the building blocks. Then once your are comfortable with each letter, mold them together with some sort of flow, such as having a symmetric bend in the letters or whatever you can create.

Hope that helps

 

[Sevage]

Aspek, that second sketch is not toy at all, lets see some sketches with extensions.

[dr_doodoo]

wow sevage best advice ive ever had thanks so much for the drawing and explanation gonna start on it now

[RES4]

massgraff- you need to learn what bars are

 

sevage- i actually dont have a clue where to start with extensions, when i try them it ends up looking like shite and i go back to doing simples. i'l keep working on them though thanks

[milkytits]

new to the site....i guess this is were i start posting :D

[Sevage]

So Aspek, I gave your style a try and it was pretty hard for me too add extensions, seemed like the easiest way to go about it was loosening up on the letters, and exaggerating a lot more on them. My Sketch was kind of a fail but I think it almost gets some points across. One of the easiest ways to make extensions look like they should be there and are in the proper place is symmetry throughout the whole piece.

 

Yea that style is just so opposite for me, I might give it another try.

 

[RES4]

ah thanks mate, my real problem is where to start the extensions. i suppose the style is too bubbly and shit and just better suited for simples

[sech]

this was for a battle

crits crits

[Sevage]

Yea iunno... extensions are possible for it, just hard... lets see what you got

 

..this style is actually pretty fun to try to learn

[Sevage]

Looks good sech

[colorkiller]

[DjKeNNyKiLoz]

Yea iunno... extensions are possible for it, just hard... lets see what you got

 

..this style is actually pretty fun to try to learn

 

Im sure its fun to learn, too bad

[DjKeNNyKiLoz]

this was for a battle

crits crits

 

Sech, your my dude, I don't mean to offend you. Your letters need a better flow, it looks like you use the same exact letter over and over. Graffiti is style, style is flow, flow in not lil wayne. Ok the the Lil wayne part was a corny joke, but if you feel you need help message me and ill try and lend a hand brotha!

[ReSoN OnEr]

limited colors but here ya go

[Tuco Salamanca]

where are the letters?

[ReSoN OnEr]

it says RES short for RESON

[Tuco Salamanca]

to be honest I don't see it. I'm not much better myself, but I think you should go simpler

[somekat]

@res4, don't listen to sevage. don't push extensions. your style is your own and the shit will come with experimentation and natural progression.

 

and @ sevage when you say "this style is actually pretty fun to learn"... What the hell? you don't just jack peoples styles and learn them. That's called biting.

 

@reson oner... super wack. looks like you were trying to imitate some ones wild style yet you don't get the concept of basic letter structure.

[ReSoN OnEr]

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[ReSoN OnEr]

@res4, don't listen to sevage. don't push extensions. your style is your own and the shit will come with experimentation and natural progression.

 

and @ sevage when you say "this style is actually pretty fun to learn"... What the hell? you don't just jack peoples styles and learn them. That's called biting.

 

@reson oner... super wack. looks like you were trying to imitate some ones wild style yet you don't get the concept of basic letter structure.

 

aight i appreciate the advice. but i was kinda rolled up while doing this one thats why i went a-wall with extensions lol and any advice on how i incorporated the characters with the bombing?

[somekat]

do simples

[freakeenyc]

reson are u in a bbc crew?

[ReSoN OnEr]

reson are u in a bbc crew?

no strictly oner why you ask?

[Tuco Salamanca]

bbc crew?

[freakeenyc]

my bad was havin a brain fart. nvm..anyways liked the R, but the other letters and the extensions need to be toned down.

 

like the hand as well

[somekat]

you're crazy if you think that r is good.

[ReSoN OnEr]

you're crazy if you think that r is good.

 

fuck get off my sack already thats why its in the toy forum

[freakeenyc]

i can do that exact same R structure wise and make it look nicer,,,but the extensions really throw it off..maybe i meant has potential to be better? basically just work on ur letter structure reson.