pos Posted August 29, 2010 Share Posted August 29, 2010 thank you very much. working on it now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted August 29, 2010 Share Posted August 29, 2010 red, this may be just be but I don't really feel the L. It seems like its bending a little too much Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted August 29, 2010 Share Posted August 29, 2010 cool, thanks man. I thought the same thing, it kinda messes up the spacing. I think if i lifted the bend a bit and straightened it out, it would fit better. E's ok? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 29, 2010 Share Posted August 29, 2010 crits? I know I fucked up the shadow. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted August 29, 2010 Share Posted August 29, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted August 29, 2010 Share Posted August 29, 2010 ele, i actually prefer something like the lower right one, with a straight bottom bar. your "L" doesn't mimic the same line on the right one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigscars Posted August 29, 2010 Share Posted August 29, 2010 I gotcha, I gotcha. Stick to simps. I tend to try to run before I can walk...also to the dude saying im trollin stop jocking my nuts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 slopi ur sketch Was a simple...just wasnt done right..u need to look at differnt font in like size big font and be able to regurgitate them relatively flawlessly..ull notice all the letters of a font share the same general formula, that helps u say distinguih heveltica and times new roman... also all these fonts share common rules to...after ur capable of doing one simple, hypothetically u can change things around with ur sketchs and make more comples font or graffiti Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idigscars Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 slopi ur sketch Was a simple...just wasnt done right..u need to look at differnt font in like size big font and be able to regurgitate them relatively flawlessly..ull notice all the letters of a font share the same general formula, that helps u say distinguih heveltica and times new roman... also all these fonts share common rules to...after ur capable of doing one simple, hypothetically u can change things around with ur sketchs and make more comples font or graffiti True, lol I actually thought I did better this time around, but its all good. fucking learning process. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 would love some crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 eh. let me know what you think edit: thanks doctor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 id get rid of your real name on the post the us history part bro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 lol. lemme reup Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 lulz, damn dude... gotta be more careful on that shit. The sketch was ok, def got the idea, but it didn't look like you allowed the overlap and erased. Kinda didn't flow right. keep it mad simple, and draw way more than you post. I only post some shit that inspires me to get direction on where to go from there. Be humble and keep your ears open. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 that hat at the top of the page is sick the middle phony is clean too havent posted in a while so here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 Those aspeks are proper simples, I don't see much need for improvement except on maybe the cracks, try and make it more flowing. Tuco, finish that C first, you aren't ready for effects like that. The letters are simple keyboard letters, just keep doing those until you can get your lines smooth and straight, they're pretty wavy, just be confident in your strokes. Also fix the R, there shouldn't be that top bit, it should be uniformly smooth like the other letters. and angle the diagonal bar at a 45 degree angle and keep it straight, it's slightly curved while the other letters aren't. Try and work on your parallel lines.(====) some of them don't match up. Dr Doodoo, the middle phony is the best for sure. stick with that, bottom N needs more space between bars. Kele, that one in the left corner is the best imo... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blar. Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 New name that I will be keeping, "Reich". Just messing around with a pen, no pencil outline, just free-styled it, came out alright.. Was the first time I tried even writing that name. Gotta fix a lot of shit though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 New name that I will be keeping, "Reich". Just messing around with a pen, no pencil outline, just free-styled it, came out alright.. Was the first time I tried even writing that name. Gotta fix a lot of shit though. The E C and I could use better placement/and or structure, try making the bottom bar of the c flow more smoothly. The r and h are nice, leave those/. The e just doesn't fit the style imo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddaWadda Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 honestly, the only thing throwing me off is that C. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 res and inj thx, ill work with the middle one more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 that hat at the top of the page is sick the middle phony is clean too havent posted in a while so here bump for crits reich- i dont get the i and the c Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickershamjam Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 aspek... i like that first one with the cracks, its nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickershamjam Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 would love some crits i like those, the only thing i don't like is the N and the Y on each one looks disproportional to all the other letters, they look a little smooshed and a little small. But not bad. Just saw you wanted crits, so there is my two cents. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickershamjam Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 oh and I don't really like the throwy at all, i know its simple, but throws are hard to get down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickershamjam Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 and the 3d is a tid bit off on the middle piece, but practice makes perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 peon4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DissentersSeekingUtopia Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 i like aspek Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr_doodoo Posted August 30, 2010 Share Posted August 30, 2010 yo wicker thanks a lot for the crits.. will definitely practice practice practice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 wanted to try something different. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
investwit.thabest Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 ^ i kinda like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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