<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 New here, but figure hell, lets get some feedback...my writing name is FATHEM...and ive wrote it over and over again for 32 pages now... slowly but surely developing a tag just wonderin what ppl think...so yeah just some feedback please:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatsagoontoagoblin Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 your sn is newbie? rly? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 i wanna change that, but i cant figure out how... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 You wasted a blackbook going page after page writing that? Just stop now..im sorry, just stop...theirs no hope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 You wasted a blackbook going page after page writing that? Just stop now..im sorry, just stop...theirs no hope. I wasted a one dollar sketch pad from dollarama.. and um, not gunna stop, going to make more changes...and that page does look pretty well the same, im sorta just changing one thing per page, so that my hand steadiness and stuff improves...the past two ive changed it every time... it costed me a dollar...i didnt even use my prismas or paint pens or good sketchbook...and im here for some advice. not just chirps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 the "name" under ur screen name just depends on how many posts you have hey Port a, crit my work!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 um yeah, but he was reffering to the fact that my screen name was newbyie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 you chose that yourself.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 ^ getting better with the throws thanks budday Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 You wasted a blackbook going page after page writing that? Just stop now..im sorry, just stop...theirs no hope. and no that was cus i was told to rewrite...and i did just that rewrite over and over, changing one thing per page... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 still trying to talk shit tork, yea ima a toy but everyone on this thread will back up my comment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 I relize that doodle....i did this account when i was smashed...and just recently found it, and i want to change that name to fathem, is there anyway of doing that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 newbie that f on that bottom right handy is good the rest of your letters need work. ANYONE DOWN FOR A HANDSTYLE BATTLE?????? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 newbie that f on that bottom right handy is good the rest of your letters need work. ANYONE DOWN FOR A HANDSTYLE BATTLE?????? Ok, but with the f, do you see that as the middle bar, or the a? cus i put it there as the a, but if it looks right as a bar... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 This reminds me of Newbie.. PM me Doodle with your sketches, im too lazy to look them up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snielsgreen Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 Hey fathem, good idea writing ur name over and over.....my advice would be to continue that except do some tags and a simple per page....keep both of them so phucking basic that u feel like ur in kindergarden....this will help at first with preportions, positioning and the relationship between the letters in ur name(this is important since its YOUR name)....studying ur tag will help u with ur simples and visa versa but only if u keep it basic....fair warning, this shit gets boring but u gotta understand the basics first so keep at it....the tags u posted would be strait if u didn't bend ur bars, like the top bar of the F pointing down and the connection in ur H from the vertical bar in the middle to the bar on the side should be ghost as well....no doubt that eventually ull be able to understand when things like that r appropriate, but right now they aren't.... check this...if u look u can see the my letters are space differently and the width of my bars aren't all exactly the same (that's bad)....I don't feel like explaing what a bar is, hopefully u understand or someone else will explain it to u...point is I tried to do it like this PHAT... Hope this help This is like graffiti school....im not sure this is a good thing O_O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 i was talking about the blue handys. keep it simple with the handys you can never go wrong with a goodlookin simp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 lollll sorry snore but i disagree, the F doesn't look good im down for handy battle, here or battle thread? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snielsgreen Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 I wanna battle.....wats the word? Phuuuck my simp looks like shit....I did it quick for the example but still..ima burn that shit O_O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TORK!! Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 start everythign over and throw that book out. all pointless u seriously think....that ur gona make me tear it up.. i mean seriously r u kiddning me? ill go ahead and try another one for you but im not tearing that up..ima fill that book up in pieces its gona take forever but in the end you kno how much experience ill have ill be proggressing every few pages in my letter structure so its fine by me..and for some reason i dont know y but when i graff i do pieces..i like throwies and tags and all but when i put that pencil down on the paper i dont stop till its full of ink.. thanks for the feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TORK!! Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 Hey fathem, good idea writing ur name over and over.....my advice would be to continue that except do some tags and a simple per page....keep both of them so phucking basic that u feel like ur in kindergarden....this will help at first with preportions, positioning and the relationship between the letters in ur name(this is important since its YOUR name)....studying ur tag will help u with ur simples and visa versa but only if u keep it basic....fair warning, this shit gets boring but u gotta understand the basics first so keep at it....the tags u posted would be strait if u didn't bend ur bars, like the top bar of the F pointing down and the connection in ur H from the vertical bar in the middle to the bar on the side should be ghost as well....no doubt that eventually ull be able to understand when things like that r appropriate, but right now they aren't.... check this...if u look u can see the my letters are space differently and the width of my bars aren't all exactly the same (that's bad)....I don't feel like explaing what a bar is, hopefully u understand or someone else will explain it to u...point is I tried to do it like this PHAT... Hope this help This is like graffiti school....im not sure this is a good thing O_O ahahha!!! my friend tags the same word!!!! u guys should be friends or battle or sumthing lmfao.. so by any chance is ur name alex? bahahahaha of so whatappppp...he does siples with ur style and everything! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 i never said tear it up kid just start from scratch thers no letter structure there. do straight ass letters then add on to them. battle in this thread, word dosnt matter throw some sugestions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TORK!! Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 ahhh thanks snore never thought of it that way "do straight ass letters then add on to them" alright well...i kinda had to do that girls name and shht so im just gona write TORK next time not in the mood to write sum different...if u want go ahead and write my name but fk it if u dont u kno Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 why would i write your name? hahaha and what about twelveounceprophet for the handy battle 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 ahahha!!! my friend tags the same word!!!! u guys should be friends or battle or sumthing lmfao.. so by any chance is ur name alex? bahahahaha of so whatappppp...he does siples with ur style and everything! fuck. w.e, im keeping the name...and no its not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<<NeWbyie>> Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 This reminds me of Newbie.. Lemme guess...toy? well no shit. but im not about to go tag the city or anyshit like that til i have somethin legit to show...so help, or shoveiit. Hey fathem, good idea writing ur name over and over.....my advice would be to continue that except do some tags and a simple per page....keep both of them so phucking basic that u feel like ur in kindergarden....this will help at first with preportions, positioning and the relationship between the letters in ur name(this is important since its YOUR name)....studying ur tag will help u with ur simples and visa versa but only if u keep it basic....fair warning, this shit gets boring but u gotta understand the basics first so keep at it....the tags u posted would be strait if u didn't bend ur bars, like the top bar of the F pointing down and the connection in ur H from the vertical bar in the middle to the bar on the side should be ghost as well....no doubt that eventually ull be able to understand when things like that r appropriate, but right now they aren't.... check this...if u look u can see the my letters are space differently and the width of my bars aren't all exactly the same (that's bad)....I don't feel like explaing what a bar is, hopefully u understand or someone else will explain it to u...point is I tried to do it like this PHAT... Hope this help This is like graffiti school....im not sure this is a good thing O_O Yeah, im just working on some tags now, (i think you only seen that one page) there's a couple up...but theres alot of issues with the first two, like arrows etc.. and im workin on tags now. Also I understand what you mean by your drawing, and although im a toy, i got the grammar down pretty good... and i had started with simple square letters, that page was after some changes that i made (like the 32nd page)... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tack1 Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 for geso Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 thanks tack. SO SOMONE NEEDS TO COME TO A DESCION FOR THIS HANDY BATTLE I SAY WE DO A TRIBUTE AND WRITE TWELVE OUNCE PROPHET Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snielsgreen Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 ahahha!!! my friend tags the same word!!!! u guys should be friends or battle or sumthing lmfao.. so by any chance is ur name alex? bahahahaha of so whatappppp...he does siples with ur style and everything! R u telling me that there is another person writing phathead?....if that's wat ur saying then ima bout to throw a phucking tantrum like a 3 year old....that shit ain't phucking cool....we're gonna have to fight or some shit....battle or something....tell me u mean phat?....cuz if its phat then we're cool and he should change his name cuz there is a well established (more than established) phat in new york O_O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 1, 2009 Share Posted October 1, 2009 12 ounce prophet had been done several times. Write BEFOUR. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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