MR.CRUS Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 all of my pieces ive done are simple enough just a lil turn and twist and some extensions thats all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 Crus - you need to lose the extensions, the arrows coming off the C and S look bad, they don't flow with the piece at all, also the jagged bit off the leg of the R just looks out of place, stay doing simples because your trying to advance too much and it isn't working, try getting your letters looking clean, the char is dope tho, I'm being harsh with the crit because it is obvious you wanna improve but your going about it the wrong way by forcing these extensions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR.CRUS Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 comeon man anythin but going back to simplish simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robot Chicken Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 Crus, well maybe not keyboard simples, give the lettres some flow, some curves, but no extensions, the ones you have tried don't work, I have said it so many times but you will get 100% more respect from writers for executing dope straight letters and simples than what your doing at the moment Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 Like it just the b and s look a lilawkward..ie the sharpness of the S and the B having thin an thick sections I fucked up the F looking back at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR.CRUS Posted September 24, 2009 Share Posted September 24, 2009 alright ill star at it tomarrow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Massachusetts Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 freak what does that even say... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 lol says freak. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beg Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 THTS NASTY CANT EVEN READ IT Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 werd? nastys a strong werd? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Massachusetts Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 ignore that kid, but I would start off with simples bro, I mean you have to pretty much go from simples, to straights, to complex straights [ minor extensions, bits and what not] and then pieces because no offence but that piece is whack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 freak has a style, it's not wack he just has to clean it up some also avoid the mysterious shrinking letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tack1 Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 crush yami and nuce looken good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tack1 Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 abys alts rose and freak are bad ass too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 freak has a style, it's not wack he just has to clean it up some also avoid the mysterious shrinking letters god damn those shrinking letters. i do the oppisite and make them bigger. only with throws though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poisonpixel Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 love the style goer try an ocean piece What does this mean? also Thank you for you compliments. I never really receive comments on my art. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 he sayin write a ocean homie, throw down a geso if you could you got some good concepts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poisonpixel Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 he sayin write a ocean homie, throw down a geso if you could you got some good concepts KK Ill do it thanks for your compliments. It make take some time. ;3 Not too long, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poisonpixel Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 I guess sometimes I am better at then others at ideas. Working with a name similar to mine kind of was weird but I did a little even though I didnt feel like using my own style. (geso) Also shitty black sharpie & camera phone quality pics. Sorry I couldn't do better. ALSO IF ANY ONE HAS A GOOD HAND STYLE SIMILAR TO SF STYLE PLEASE WRITE MY NAME & COULD you give me props if you liek? I dont really like that ban shit on there. :c 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 somekat, first one would be good if you didnt extend the C across the piece like that. 2nd one would be good if you matched the E's styles with the C and S's style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poisonpixel Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 somekat, first one would be good if you didnt extend the C across the piece like that. 2nd one would be good if you matched the E's styles with the C and S's style. For the 2nd one I think it would be better if you only changed the C to match the rest or so it is not as big. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 aight cool. what about my style/structure? I'm on ap forums as well and peeps tell me that I need to work on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 For the 2nd one I think it would be better if you only changed the C to match the rest or so it is not as big. my issue with it is that the E's are 2 totally diff styles, while the C and S have similar flow and style. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poisonpixel Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 my issue with it is that the E's are 2 totally diff styles, while the C and S have similar flow and style. Lol I guess I'm not that good at criticising. I just thought that they all looked fine but the C looks big and awkward. I never though about the flow so go with donaldfour's advice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 i see what you're saying about the flow. the c and s top "bar" or whatever give it that style, and i see the e's are out of wack. I'll work on keepin shit the same, thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 aight cool. what about my style/structure? I'm on ap forums as well and peeps tell me that I need to work on that That too, work on your structure. And keep your letters the same size. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poisonpixel Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 That too, work on your structure. And keep your letters the same size. Lol What is structure? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted September 25, 2009 Share Posted September 25, 2009 what makes a letter a letter... bars and whatnot. simple concept, hard to apply when sketching. at least for me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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