torch21 Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 OK, guys everybody tell me tom make sample latter. Please show me where is the issue whit my letters, too know where to correct them. And thanks for the crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinx2162k Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 Pen sketch! thoughts? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickerman21 Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 OK, guys everybody tell me tom make sample latter. Please show me where is the issue whit my letters, too know where to correct them. And thanks for the crits. Simple letters are like the ones on your keyboard. DIOS <like that. Make sure all your letters are the same size, width and height. Simple 3D too, get rid of all the extensions and hookups. Jinx I'd say you need to go simpler too, the A, R, and N look dodgy as hell in that sketch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted March 15, 2012 Share Posted March 15, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 don't worry about telling me about bars and shitty extensions. really just want to know what to do about the e, how to fill up negative space better between it and the r and finding something nice to do with the bottom of the thing quality criticism is much appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheel out Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 cheel by Cheelin, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 sureishitty work on tha e bro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 yeah i guess all you can do in the end is draw and paint Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 SPER, your E is just way bigger than the rest of your letters hence the negative space and awkwardnss of it compared to the other letters. I personally think there's a big gap between the top horizontal bar of your E and the middle one..just moving it closer will help with the negative space, also a lower case e can also work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 Why biting fills is a total waste of time at least the letters are getting better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zytar Posted March 18, 2012 Share Posted March 18, 2012 ''S'' & ''E'' should flow together... Shot with a Sony Cyber-Shot W10 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted March 18, 2012 Share Posted March 18, 2012 bump nothing on this page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/019.jpg[/img]"] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 bump nothing on this page. i used to post in here quite a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 tramp why you hatin you know toy threads never deserve bumps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickerman21 Posted March 20, 2012 Share Posted March 20, 2012 bump nothing on this page. Whats the need for that shit? Either give crits, post a pic or say nothing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawdog502 Posted March 20, 2012 Share Posted March 20, 2012 still looks like ass. your control is wack Damn, good thing i know you, lmfao, makin pple cry and shit :bawling: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted March 20, 2012 Share Posted March 20, 2012 http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/jakd.jpg[/img]"] for my niggas. FUSAxDLK HAHAHAHAHA i didn't realize this was the dude talkin shit in here til just now HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted March 20, 2012 Share Posted March 20, 2012 yeah he's a real piece of shit! :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted March 21, 2012 Share Posted March 21, 2012 its been so long i couldn't find any of my blackbooks but i realized i really missed drawing so i tried it again. crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted March 21, 2012 Share Posted March 21, 2012 first sketch in a minute Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja x status Posted March 21, 2012 Share Posted March 21, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted March 21, 2012 Share Posted March 21, 2012 got no crits........ i know its not perfect but both you guys look pretty solid to me. ninja your 3d seems a bit off in some parts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted March 21, 2012 Share Posted March 21, 2012 its sick! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 Baze, keep drawing, dont post everything you do. Your letters are all different thicknesses and sizes, make ure bars consistent. Show that you can do a solid simple before you try adding any funk to the letters. that goes for everyone, take your time and put in the hours, your gonna need at least a year before your stuff even resembles graffiti. That is unless you bite the shit out of someone elses work... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 also byest and jits looking good. Jits maybe reign in the T and S. The top bar of your T is a little on the thin side. Nothing else in your sketch is that thin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 w/o background w/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rawdog502 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 CRITS?? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 Jakd, try simples man, your bar width is all over the place, and your 3d is off in a lot of different places. also not a fan of the bubbles. but you're handstyle in my opinion looks fine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 22, 2012 Share Posted March 22, 2012 no no no, handstyle is busted. Yours too zen. Start from your normal hand writing and clean that up, all capitals for the start helps. You wanna be filling pages with alphabets and your tag. it takes time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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