Raven907 Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 Afew more pics. . . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven907 Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 the first one took me like an hour to get the sizes right it says What's your angel? the second one is my really shitty bubble letters just cant get them to look as good as i want them to the last one is just a weird tag that drew up in under a minuet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven907 Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 this is not my work a girl drew this on my friends hand so i took a picture of it because i like it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 Nice rose, your camera is hella blurry tho. Your simples look nice you just need to keep churning them out and changing them slightly and learning when stuff is off. The advice i got was to make all your bars even and the same size, experiment with different words if you like, become familiar with what makes the letter unique. With bubble writing its the same thing, keep your letter widths equal. Best to experiment with 3D and shadow once you feel that your letter shapes are solid but dont put it off, u want things to progress at an equal rate. Also, get involved as soon as u can with the battles dude, its a toy battle, no one is gonna burn you. Plus gives u an incentive to up your game. My 2 cents. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 eons, all your posts look exactly alike. and that little O doesn't help anything. that yoka looks clean. I'm pretty sure that this, which is the last thing I posted on this forum, and this are not exactly alike. Similar, yes, but that's cause it's the same name and a similar style.. Anyway, any real crits on the pen freestyle? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 ok homie, take it or don't. maybe those particular pieces aren't exactly alike, but i'm not the only one that has given you those crits. i'm glad you stopped doing those pointless bars on top at least. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 my crit is to take crits better. They are very, very similar sketches. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 the silver eons is wayy better also...make ur Os more prominent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 no beef...but whats the point of asking for crits if you're being a bit pretentious? are you sure you know what that word means? because nothing i said could be considered "pretentious". i just explained why i did what i did. pretentious is pretty much a sense of unwarranted self importance. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven907 Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 n30n b0n35 thanks for the advice man im going to try and post some better bubble letter shit in the next few days I cant promise nothing though lol anyway again thanks for the advice I will post the changes i make to the block letters once i color them and try out some simple 3D shit nothing too complicated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 I'm pretty sure that this, which is the last thing I posted on this forum, and this are not exactly alike. Similar, yes, but that's cause it's the same name and a similar style.. Anyway, any real crits on the pen freestyle? best advice I can give you is to scrap the pen sketch the grey piece is years better... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted January 29, 2011 Share Posted January 29, 2011 so, playing on what that other guy said with the E and W.. from my experience (looking at the top left of the W) making one of the bars go from skinny to thick makes it look better when you are not matching the lines up. Your letter structure is NOT wrong but it is very common to match up the bars like on the right side of the W Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 been like forever since i posted any work but sometimes thats how life goes. ave at em.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
so far so good Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 siiiiiiiiiick stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 ye that second one's colours a sick, tight too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysn Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 Help a toy learn, I was hoping to see some some real basic tags, and if u could kinda an explanation of why it flows so well. Yeah I know I'm a toy so don't ramble on about how dumb a question this is, either please help or don't cause I'm serious about learning all I can, I've only been at it for a week so yeah... Help a toy please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 my general initial advice is to look through several of the pages over her and see the kind of critiques they have gotten...so u understnad whta ppl are doing wrong and what u should be doing as well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 That twist shit is garbage. pen freebie oldddddddd ass collab with moon that I just filled.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 Help a toy learn, I was hoping to see some some real basic tags, and if u could kinda an explanation of why it flows so well. Yeah I know I'm a toy so don't ramble on about how dumb a question this is, either please help or don't cause I'm serious about learning all I can, I've only been at it for a week so yeah... Help a toy please? post a sketch of yours Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 That twist shit is garbage. lmfao, you post shit like that and have the balls to say someone elses work is garbage.. nice hahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 one from this afternoon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bed framed Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 not bad, the color scheme is definitely on point! I would say work on styling your letters a little more, they look like they need some life. Try making them as curvy as the S, the W & Y look kind of stiff. I like the flow of the letters too, bump! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 lmfao, you post shit like that and have the balls to say someone elses work is garbage.. nice hahaha um yeah. your letters suck, old man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 psssst .. your ignorance is showing.... little boy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 -_____- you got dope fills, but your letters are trash. dumb your shit down. take my advice or not, i don't give a shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 one from this afternoon that color scheme is on fucking point, but those letters are retarded. those t's are off center as hell, not to mention the first one hides the tops of the other letters too much. that w has no definition to it. mad inconsistencies in your bars, especially where the y's arm joins together with it's spine. iono whats going on with the 3d between the first t and the w, but fix it. oh yeah, and that tag sucks. yeah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 you cant call his letters retarded considering you posted this twyst, the letters are not retarded. the w is but the rest are fine. just work on flow yous cunts need to lay of the weed cause its fucking with your eyes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 i mean clearly everyone here needs work...s'why we post here...but calling shit garbage isnt a critique,. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 you cant call his letters retarded considering you posted this twyst, the letters are not retarded. the w is but the rest are fine. just work on flow yous cunts need to lay of the weed cause its fucking with your eyes are you kidding? do you not fucking see where his shit is all different sizes? you can't tell me that doesn't look bad. yeah, i suck, but at least i can keep my bars some what consistent widths. and fuck outta here, that was all legit advice. its better than throwing out some vague shit like, "hurr durr, work on your flow". what part of it needs working on? what do you mean by flow? that's hardly helpful. and tell me, what's so wrong with mine to where my opinions should just be withheld? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevage Posted January 30, 2011 Share Posted January 30, 2011 wooooa....lets not blame the weed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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